Lol. Wow, she's having a bad day... Sounds kinda like me, I can't cook either :P.
Can't wait to see where this is going!
~pont

Hey Kim! Ya need to update something. At least I'm ALMOST done with chapter 19 of ADA...I'll post it this weekend...*^.^* and I've written two more chapters of Like Rain: As Long as a Voice A Will Sing...and I'll type those up...chapter 6 is 15 pages long in my comp book...it's going to take forever to type...plus I only type like 40 words per minute or something like that...please update! Merle Goddess is being a butthead and is rewriting Lost Searching. It's now called The Grace Cage and although they fall in love, Kyru and Shiva are...BROTHER AND SISTER...THEY EVEN MAKE OUT! *shudders* She's trying to punish me just because of my really sucky ending to Like Rain: As Long as a Voice Will Sing.
Anyway...I like this story too...all it needs is a guy that she falls in love with...

First wanted to thank you for reviewing my poem; im glad you liked it! Good job on the story! it was well written, more than i can say for i never really attempted writing a story! my sister has and hers are the only stories i really read... but i liked yours! if you ever want to check out my sisters, her pen name is Niennaalatariel, im sure she would be more than happy to review yours too! Anyway thanx for the review and keep writing! =)

*looks at watch and taps kinata's head with her water bottle* it's time for you to update!
as for me taking down the other poem, i took it down cos it seriously needed some work. well, i was actually proud i did a happy poem (thanks for the beautiful review too ~.^) but...it had to go. i'll put it back up...eventually.
ALL HAIL THE CULT OF THE CHOCOLATE WORSHIPPERS, WITH ADRENALINA AND KINATA AS SUPREME RULERS
seriously, it's the best. i've been known to shut myself up on bad depressing days and kill two pans of brownies.
try http://kabalarians.com/cfm/surf-by.cfm?Baby=Yes
for your character names...they have a million or more names there with a summary of what kind of personality a person with that name would typically have. kinda interesting
and then update!

Hey Kim...
No, I'm not sad...my poems just end up that way for some reason. I don't know why, but I've been getting writer's block for a month...I'll get over it tho,
-Heiko ^.-

Hey, very good.
I'm no veteran of the game, but you write a decent story. I actually enjoyed it, and I'm one of thiose people who can't sit still for 15 minutes unless I'm reading something action packed or gory.
You started a real hook, keep it going.

Nice... A little bit more quantity is needed.

umm i'll send you that vivica thing soon. address is
cmr 406 bo...
ok, wait, i'm doing something kind of stupid altho i doubt anyone will actually send something.
umm i'll send that soon too.
the new chapter: pretty good, me like it. i liked the sentence where you described her hair, especially. just needs a few little nips and tucks, and you've got something really nice :)
hehehe, if we ever somehow got sucked into your little story i'd end up being the clueless teacher.
;p, that time you wrote about dreaming about sleeping on cookie cutters i dreamt while i was taking my nap that i was buying the copyrights to one of my favorite songs on e-bay ^^. btw, saved any cookies for me? ~.^
as soon as i get more than a few paragraphs and odd bits of sentences from different parts, i promise to also send you my latest. i really would've written more, enough to post it, but i want to concetrate on the background of it and how it'll work so i don't have to confuse myself later. but i will tell you it involves a narcoleptic faery and a faeryland having weird connections with the old civilizations...but anyway, you'll see.
-- adrenalina, who is now running out of excuses to study her biology notes.

umm i'll send you that vivica thing soon. address is
cmr 406 bo...
ok, wait, i'm doing something kind of stupid altho i doubt anyone will actually send something.
umm i'll send that soon too.
the new chapter: pretty good, me like it. i liked the sentence where you described her hair, especially. just needs a few little nips and tucks, and you've got something really nice :)
hehehe, if we ever somehow got sucked into your little story i'd end up being the clueless teacher.
;p, that time you wrote about dreaming about sleeping on cookie cutters i dreamt while i was taking my nap that i was buying the copyrights to one of my favorite songs on e-bay ^^. btw, saved any cookies for me? ~.^
as soon as i get more than a few paragraphs and odd bits of sentences from different parts, i promise to also send you my latest. i really would've written more, enough to post it, but i want to concetrate on the background of it and how it'll work so i don't have to confuse myself later. but i will tell you it involves a narcoleptic faery and a faeryland having weird connections with the old civilizations...but anyway, you'll see.
-- adrenalina, who is now running out of excuses to study her biology notes.

Its interesting.
You've just set stuff up, and I'm already wondering how am i going to tear my eyes away from this.
And don't worry about not finishing, most people dont't *like me* finish theirs at all. They just keep writing stuff as they progress in life *yet again that is another description of me*

Its good, I don't see any flaws, and I'm enterested.
*Thanks again*

Sly

im always starting stories i never finish so i know how you feel.

the title is an eye catcher, which is really really good. i like it.

your writing style is different from my own and from what im used to, but that isnt a bad thing. it just makes you stick out, which is good, right? anyway, the chapter is pretty short and i would read one of your longer stories but i gotta go to school...but because its short i cant tell ya much besides that so far its sounding good!

~color outside the lines~

oh, good. it's really interesting. i like it. please continue! i wanna know what happens!

really awesome preface, if i do say so myself. I stink at starting stories- you seem to have a good knack for it.

*you review for me i review for you*

Interesting.

You've really set up a good mood for this story. I got a feeling of despair and interest at the same time. Very powerful.

I look forward to more.

P.s. The name of the poem is very relevant, and if you ask, i'll tell you why.

it sounds interesting...so will the next chapter reveal what's driving her insane besides her looks? Now onto the non-story related stuff!

OMG! @_@ I thought you were freaking dead! I mean, I got the occasional forward, but when I tried sending an email, I never got a reply!! Aww, cat-haters suck! About the poetry idea, I'm doing that from my poetry anthology assignment to a story for the young authors seminar. Btw, about the Queen...hmm, I've descended the throne for a moment, off pursuing other things than taking over the world...like taking over hell and then slowly heaven...then I will reclaim my position as Queen of the World. And working a career as freelance writer and designer...but don't think that I'll let you off the hook easy because you're a few thousand miles away and that my interests are elsewhere, I'll come back and take it back, believe me =^_^=. Have you heard from Kimiko lately? Ok, write back!

w00t.

I like this, 'cause as it is you can't quite tell if it's all in her head or if she's got real demons after her. tis quite nift-ay. go you!