hey, my first review of the year. anyway, nice, easy to relate to too.

Hey... so depressing... very good tho!! really thought provoking and emotional... be more pleasant lol

i can most definitely relate. People don't see the real you, it's all a false image so they can't see inside you, so it can't hurt. but that mask blinds even you everyday. take it off, let it all out.

yo..what's up? um yeah. this poem is something i'm sure EVERYONE can relate to. it's the same for all of us, so don't feel so alone. it really isn't that bad. trust me. we've all been there, so try to relax while you can.
~sam

hm.. find out wat death is like when ur REALLY old.. rite now u just old ;) and we teens, mood swings r normal i think.. PMS!! hehe jp :Þ

PLEASE!
DON'T!
LET!
SUCH!
FEELINGS!
STIR!
UP!
INSIDE!
OF!
YOU!!!!!
Death is HORRIBLE!

I'm glad you still have some who make you feel happy:) there were many unwanted people in Calcutta where Mother Teresa served - mothers whose children and husband completely forgot about them...

Kev there are MANY people out there who do care about you even though it may seem that they don't understand or they say nothing was wrong at all. You are special!

well, i would say nice poem but it really makes me...uh...upset[?] to read this type of thing from you. please, just dont do anything...bad. i'll get sad...with the other 5 gazillion people. there is so much to live for, obviously not now but its coming. sooner or later...

ah, adolescence...but stop wondering about death, you're not going anyplace. good poem

Yeah i feel that way too sometimes...let go of all your pain...let go....

Free my corrupted soul...


Let go of my frail hands..


Feel no longer my eyes of coal...


And my body's condensing sands

There's already a poem with this name.

I can very very very much relate to this. ^_^. Excellent Work!!