I've read all the cute reviews and i just desperately want to read it D: maybe..you could send it? D: my e-mail's

OMG
I love it!
YOU HAVE TALENT!
I can't wait to finish this...

I really like the characters but the whole "make-up turned her pretty" thing is rather superficial...and glasses can be sexy ;) in fact, my buddeh natasha rocks the whole "sexy librarian" look :)

and i know its a manga but sometimes the flow is awkward...

'I have absolutely no chest, (Look at me, you know it's true!) I have a big nose, I'm fat, and I always have my nose in a book.'

felt a little repetitive...i suggest "..., I'm fat, and I always have my big nose in a book."

sorry if i seemed a bit critical :S but i'm guess i'm used to editing my friends stories quite a bit... :\

Wow...this is really good. I mean, it would be even awesomer as a real manga with pics and everything u know? Hey, I really like Japanese stuff like mangas and things, so this was really good. I loved it and it was so sweet! Just a little sad at the end though. But still happy

You could have had a really sute ending. HER BROTHER, he loved her right? The type of love wasn't really specified, ne?
It would have been oh so kawaii!
Oh well, maybe one day you'll redo this story and fix the inconsistances and all.

Toodles.

Umm.. You don't know much about medicine do you? Blood doesn't get too old... It can coagulate... But doctors use an anti-caogulant to prevent that(Yes, I can't spell).
And I'm pretty sure that the Y-guy's thingy wouldn't cause him to never wake up. And even if it did, a lot of people donate blood. "Special blood" can come from many different people.
I don't know how old you were when you wrote this, I'm assuming, since it was a while ago you were younger. But a lot of this story is weird.
But I'll give you that it's cute, and if you were to go over it and research a bit of medical what-not and Japanese mannerisms, you could make a very cute, manga thing.
Your other story, the one with the genie, was much much better. Definitely the better of all your stories.

awsome haha
xx

You write really well. But still, for some reason I find Emi in these beginning chapters quite annoying. Her inner beauty does not shine through. Let's hope she starts to grow some balls hey? hehehehe

i decided to review this chap only b/c of the hairflipping thing which i find hilarious!! in 8thgrade my friend and i sat nxt to each other in math and flipped our hair at each other thus creating a hairflipping war (ya our teacher thought we were crazy) lol anyway this story is very amusing. i feel bad for Emi b/c she Yu and wat she just overheard. I like the pairing of Ko and Yu though... well im off to read more (srry bout my hairflipping tangent
~~oh and i luv rootbeer so i bet i would like japanese medicine lol

This is one weird intro:transformation

me love your story!! me love yuu watase's books too! Have you read Fushigi yugi: genbu kaiden?? its great!!sorry, abit hight from all the sugar...

For some reason this reminded me of Card Captor Sakura [ I don't know why] and Yu-chan reminds me a lot of Tomoyo. o_o;;

DarkFox: Gack! That was so sweet!! I was really worried when Emi kept trying to push Shinto away and T.T er... ignore what I wrote in my last... most likely confusing... review... -.-' anyway, this is on meh FAVORITES! XD the story gave me a fluffy feeling for the moment! -kisses Shadow-

Shadow Wolf: O.O ... -blush!-

DarkFox: X3 GREAT STORY!

DarkFox: What? It's not Shinto! No! It has to be! Man!! I should really read the parts at the beginning and end huh? -sigh- or... is Shinto just not the one that loved her before, but still loves her for her... & will still be with her at the end? I hope so... Oo! Maybe it's Ko... even though kissing her brother would be wrong... but at least she could still be with Shinto! -sighs again- I hope... but anyway... srry for the rediculously long review...

Shadow Wolf: Jeez Dark... think your review is long enough -grins-

DarkFox: Torcher! Sheer torcher I tell you! Gack!