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| Well-Worn-Chaos 2003-08-16 ch 1, | abusereality is a crutch for people who cant handle drugs. >_>; This, again, is really good. ... 'super' as the grading policy in this .. club thing i'm not in would say |
| Unfinished Author 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abusePaints a very vivid picture, i like the metaphor of a line like a teatering (sp??!) edge, its something everyone feels at sometime. Relateable, congrats again. |
| Chantal 2003-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abusei like what its about n junk...(been there...) but the flow could be a lil better |
| Shadafakup 2003-05-08 ch 1, | abuseWhoa.. strong n well presented.. Trapped in between is so much worse than anythin else right.. Great poem.. I liked it.. |
| Twisted angel 69 2002-12-23 ch 1, | abusethis is really good and so true i always slip into my own world and worry bout everything in sight and it ruins everything and so much other stuff this is really good |
| Mackenzie Anderson 2002-11-04 ch 1, | abuseSometimes we're trapped in between... and sometimes fantasy is far worse than reality. |