Hi!

Well, somehow I stumbled across this story. No idea how.

It's good! Actually had my heart beating fast there. Scarier than anything I've read recently. Then again, I am totally a scaredy-cat when it comes to these things.

Okay, I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I still want to submit my own review. If you ever have a chance to go back and edit it, I'd do that. There are a few typographical and spelling errors. Get rid of the notes between the chapters, too (e.g., "I'll finish it soon!"). That sort of ruins the whole cliff-hanger experience. ;)

The ending was a bit abrupt, too.. my mind was still reeling from the last bit of news. But I think that's good in the sense that the reader has to stop and think after the story has finished.

I really liked it! No way I could have stopped and "come back to it later". Great beginning, hook, and analogies for everything. :)

Keep writing! I'll try to read some more...Sharon

It was really good. *Peace*

wow...freaky. i like it! i can't wait to read spring darkness! keep writing sierradogbaby Love ya Lots sweetie!! -dumb pixie-

Loved it! Hope that you'll keep writing....

i'm too damn lazy to sign in-- anyways, i really liked this story.

eh.....sequil? nah. i think it was wrapped up nicely. great ending, although it was very sad.

wow...great finish! sob...that was pretty sad tho...oh well, i liked it anyway! good job

so does sam die? that's my big question. i've liked this story through every cliffhanger and scary moment.

can't wait to find out what happens next

wow, that was good.

wow...this isn't the end yet, is it? i doubt it is, but i'm just making sure...this gets better with each chapter! i especially liked Sam's thoughts on her life...very realistic. keep up the good work

Hey! What's up with the short chapter! Just kidding. This is a really good story. I think you need to let us know who this person is! Or if Clair and Corey are dead and what about her parents! Please, Please keep writing. Nevada
LYLAS

short, but good none the less.

please continue

hmm, what a cliffhanger! i like it though.