these just get shorter and shorter, don't they? that's not a bad thing, of course. it's never a bad thing. but how you can take 23 words (i counted. hah) and make them mean so much is just magical.

Another well written poem. If you find the time, do you mind checking me out sometime? Keep it up! _

*blinks* Did you get in my brain and write this? This is so close to a situation I'm in, it's scary.

And so, I have to love this poem to death. It's beautiful, and I love those last two lines 'Sugar-poison/For my mind' - Awesome.

More poems. *prods*

- Your Friend's Purple-Eyed Alter Ego