AW!I love them...Vincent...makes me go *squee*

Sweet story . . . I read it on your website. I was imagining Fedeth to look like Folken from Escaflowne. *drool* Ehehe. There were some typos in here but nothing too serious. I think I only found about ten in the whole story.
I love your slash stories. Must read more. ^^
-rai

well done this was really good abit strange granted but good all the same. you've got good writing skills