wow. i'm afraid i can't say anything *nearly* as intelligent as the last two reviewers, so can i just start worshipping you now?

Well, I would say something if I could. I really enjoyed this one. And provided it's actually a meta-for gender roles in society, I think I'm really able to, at the least, understand it's clear, and direct simplicity of message, and connect with it at first blush. Nice.

-kirney

ah this poem is so beautiful. so simple and straight-forward, like a gaze of someone who's eyes are stormy and dark, but who today looks at you clearly clearly and you can see that she is almost as tall as you now

lorraine