I love how the narrator comes to the conclusion that it's all a dream at the very start of things, yet still can't do ** about it. Instead, things just kind of get worse.
In short; badass.

wow!! M.C. im glad im i don't have dreams lke that anymore...very good and eeire...write more.

Well, I dont understand what significance the summary has to the story, oh well, I guess it can hide behind the catagory of art. The story was wierd, which is what I am sure you were going for, but it wasnt a good wiered, to me any way. I found a bit annoying, i kept saying, lokk damnit. damn. must finish reading. I found it un-entertaining and the fact that it was a dream cheapens it. But, wording was good, just a bad concept. Which means that you arent a bad writer(you have enough good reviews to tell you that) just a bad story. I dont want to hear; "you should talk, your stories suck!" I know. I go for a "wow, that was so retarded I laughed" and I get it. have fun. see ya

wow mc. i can't find words to describe how that made me feel. let's try: creeped out or goosebumpily. five thumbs up and you get an A for effort. (and for being such a damn good writer!)

Ummm....Well, I was to classify this as anything, it would be a ripoff of a poem you've never read by Edgar Allen Poe called The Bells. But, since you haven't read it, I think this fic is pretty all right. Not bad, yo.

Scary, but it would have been scarier had it been longer. It seemed just as I was working up a good heart rate, it was over. Just left wanting more . .
As for the fiddle, the blood, the setting, and the girl, those were .......... ugh, creepy as **. Nice nice nice.