I am really into the story thus far... waiting patiently for the next chapter.

Just this first chapter was striking... it could stand alone. But I'm off to read more!!

I a few years later, you've got me hooked again. I got really excited when I read that author's note, hehe... thanx! Your voice just gets better and better... Just wondering: there were a few more old-style words the narrator began to use after deciding she was Beatrix... = getting memory back? Awesomeness... btw... :) I started over!

update update update! I'm glad to see the story is progressing :D Amos seems mean though... :( It'd be nice if a drake bit him... hehehe...
Anyway, UPDATE!

You're just gonna drop it there?!? You can't do that!

would loosing your memory really be that bad if you ended up living with a nice boy who takes care of dragons? I think not so much. hahaha ^^

It's going good! If the pace was a bit fast, I didn't mind, it still was a good chapter. I liked the length, but I feel sorry for the horse.

Keep it up! I'm waiting for those updates!

I like it. I like it alot. One thing, does anyone but me notice that the first and third chapters are EXACTLY THE SAME! Just thought I'd mention it. It's not bad though, I like the story.

Hmm, interesting. Your style is completely different than most things I've read before, but it totally fits the story of a girl with no memory or purpose. However, did you know that your first and third chapters are the same thing? Which is right? Well, keep the chapters coming. By the way, I like the name Victoria, coughthatsmynamecough. :]

At last! Another chapter! I'm so happy, and it's progressing the plot too! Longer chapters, like this one, are good, so please keep writing them. I want to see how this story turns out. Keep writing!

Whoa, this is certainly grabbing! Who is she? (Victoria I mean) and what happened to her? This is very good so far and you need to continue writing it! (hehehe, yes that is a threat from one of your somewhat looney readers!)

Wow, Fable! Another eye-hooking beginning! (DoYouBelieveInFaeries was a masterpiece, by the way!) I'm just wondering what kind of world this is, if there are purple-robed nobles in clean, white hospitals.? Keep up the good work! Can't wait for Ch3!

very good start, it has me wondering what will happen next...? It reads alot like a poem in spots, which is intresting.write more!

Nice story so far. But I have a question: since you say she is a "noble" and in a hospital room, um, when exactly does this story take place?
But it's very good otherwise. Maybe longer chapters, but it's ok like this too. Keep writing!

Interesting! Nice cliffhanger too...You must continue...What happened to Victoria, and why is she like that?!?