I like! Very free flowing, while at the same time keeping a steady pattern. I like the metaphors, too.

Ah! Another beautiful one! What else can be said that hasn't already? Your poetry is just filled with so much life and valor, and like songs with no music attached they play in your head like a beautiful dream. Keep writing, the world needs poets like you!

Nice poem ^_^ Even if I don't understand it in the least (I'm not very good with metaphors). It makes you think though. Nice job!

~Pink Parka Girl

PS - Did you even READ the email I sent you?

Hey, awesome job!!! It flows super well and I luv it!!! Great job!!!


Thanx for the review!!!

oh, very inspiring! :D carpe diem indeed... reminds me an awful lot of the dead poets' society. -_^ nice rhymes!

I really liked that. I can tell you're a William Blake fan. I like Songs of Experience better than Innocence though... "The Tyger" is the best.

'Free the days' is a very enchanting line. It makes the poem.

I hated metaphors a couple years ago because they really held me back, you know?

Keep at it, and yes I'm still alive (just studying until I can make a solid stand here),

Curtis Perry

Mmmm, very nice. I like it.~CT

wow excellent use of metaphors (Y) yes really good

Excellent! I love it! Do you mind checking me out? Keep writing! ^_^

Nice. I like the metaphors. You're so good with words, unlike some people *cough cough me cough cough* And I envy you. But that's ok. You write too well to be envied in the hate envy- hmmm perhaps a better word is admiration? Yeah, I think that's what I'm trying to say- Your quality of poems it what I aspire to be like! YEAH! I finally found the words I was looking for. Anywho, I thought I'd drop in and say "Hello" Well, keep up the good work! GO SPEED RACER GO!

Hmmm very metaphorical, gotta love em! I have a few new poems up btw..lol I like this poem, I can def see the carpe diem thing, it works! Muy Bien!
~Whiro~

Beautifully written. Love the metaphors. Keep up the good work. I eagerly await your next work. Peace.