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| Sylvara 2008-05-23 ch 2, | abuseNicely written. May a little long by times (some refelxions may me a little repetitive) but It kept my interest up. |
| M.R.Sanner 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI love the whole dragon/human thing >< This was really fun to read and imaginative . |
| letylyf 2003-04-10 ch 1, | abusethis was a pretty darn good story, the plot was touching and your writing style kept me interested up until the end. the level of detail you put in was excellent, it gave the story a far more intriguing aspect than if you had simply stated the story. this touched me- a very simple but timeless story. is it over, tho? I'd like to see things work out in the end *sighs wistfully* ok, so I'm a sap. lol |
| Xy Hapu 2003-02-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, I liked this a lot! I especially liked the next-to-last line, "I'm sorry I lied to you.....and I'm sorry that you loved a dragon." Her voice breaks slightly. "...This dragon will always love you." That was simply awesome. Is this the end of the story or is there more? Sounds like there may be with Ohanzee and that war he was talking about. You have a really to-the-point writing style (not at all a bad thing), most authors would've taken at least ten chapters to put all the stuff in that you did. Great job, I hope this is continued sometime. |