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Beth
2004-05-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou are a warrior, but feel free to take off the armour.
You are allowed to hurt, to cry, to crumble.
You are not alone.
Just Another Face
2003-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI feel like this sometimes :-\


Great job on the poem, it flows nicely... ^.^


~Lyndz~
PsYcHoChICk2
2002-12-01
ch 1,
abusegod i feel the same way... i understand how somtimes it is just so hard to go on and be strong. it was well writeen also. i like.
Dark Syren
2002-11-30
ch 1,
abuseLord Jareth, I put you on my favorites because of LOVE your work!!! This poem is making me cry...*tears* its fantastic
Welbutrin Junkie
2002-11-01
ch 1,
abuseOk... that hit WAY to close to home... Good poem btw. You're goin on my fav list btw. Well bai
No Longer Posting Here
2002-11-01
ch 1,
abusei can relate to that..........200%!!! that was really great.

~GeN!
Whiro
2002-10-22
ch 1,
abuseOhhh I know the feeling. I feel so alone a lot of the time, there is never anyone there to comfort me when I curl up in the ball in my room and cry, I don't want to be strong all the time but I have to, it hurts, and it sucks! Great Poem! I am adding it to my favs! Muy Bien!
~Whiro~
weelilwolf
2002-10-22
ch 1, anon.
abusewow. That's a really good poem. I like the word choice. I myself, prefer rhyming poems, but i still really like this adn can relate. I'm glad u didn't leave ff.net!!
An Anonymous Tipster
2002-10-18
ch 1,
abuseOnce more, Amen. Really, that all you can do with poetry.
hudsiyfiusnfsudi
2002-10-18
ch 1,
abusei know that feeling somewhat. you hold everythign inside just to be strong and then when you`re alone with no one to hold you the feelings come out like a wave of pain. i`m ramling again. great poem.
Meegwun
2002-10-02
ch 1,
abuseoh man, do i ever know that feeling.
really lovely poem! :)
Rini
2002-10-01
ch 1,
abuseI tend to find myself in this state of mind, as many other people do. Though isnt that how life works? The key is to survive, but the question is how? Loved the poem, beautiful.
Deleted150
2002-09-30
ch 1,
abuseI agree totally and completely. Nice poem, very heartfelt, i really liked the "warrior carved from stone", keep writing - E.
2lazy2signin
2002-09-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI understand how you feel.
Good Morning Mr. Three Cats
2002-09-30
ch 1,
abuseLove it! I feel like that sometimes too . . . actually, most of the time . . . ^_^;;
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