This was great~ I really enjoyed reading it!!!

when are you gonna loose your touch? it seems everthing of urs i read ALWAYS kicks ** man :P

i don't know what to say... but this was well written!

Haha! love it! .... not quite sure what to think though. But then, I did just wake up and am a bit off.
~not 12, but 22. lol I'm a liar. I'd appreciate any more reviews you're willing to give me because I'm publishing a book of originals and I need to know what stays and what goes. I will most definently continue to read your work, it is great. Keep at it, you'll get somewhere. =) Off to read more now ;)
Kara
PS -If you're an archangel, why do I have your sword? lol I have on that likes to shine blue, giving the appearance of flames about it... and when my best friend Jake comes home drunk, I must to my Archangel Micheal impression with the sword and say, "Down there" pointing at the basement. Amusing, no?

Great piece of work. Read mine it is nothing compared to this. But I try keep writing!