Very good. I love it. Very well done and a great poem about wishing and loving.

Hey come on try to notice other things/people and not keep your mind on one thing (what seems to be happening) come over some time and play DDR :)

"And I sit here with a crappy rhyme." Muis amusing, tAng. I'm not going to ask who you're writing about, but I do know that I can relate. I think there's not a girl out there who can't. Good poetry.