oh! Why'd you have to leave off on such a cliff hanger? Meanie :D just joking! I love love love this story! IT's great! ...hmm i want to read your other one too! okay then-.- reading begins!!Mwahaha

Likey! read more tomorrow! :D

I REALLY like this story!! I will read more tomorrow:)

Cool! I like this! You know there's an anime with a character named Ran. Oh! This is a good story! Keep on writing! Since I reviewed, wanna see my story? I'd be so happy if you reviewed! Update soon!

Interesting weapon for Mika. Very clever! =P

This story is very well written and pleasantly original and creative. Very nicely done! However, I think the demon plant in the restaurant scene was a bit typical especially the hopping from table to table with them being destroyed just as her foot leaves them. Up until the point of the lightening sword, I believe that is just about the exact scene from an "Outer limits" show.

This really is a good story. Very interesting and captivating!

Hi there,

You may not notice, but I've been reading your story and it happened to be the first story I read in this website! Anyway, I like the way Ran behaves and retains the old Japan language and behaviour, and somehow, she reminds me of someone, but let's not get to that point shall we? Anyway, keep on going with the story. I'll be waiting for the updates so that I can drown myself in this story and visualise it like a movie. Good luck and umm... do reply back when you have the spare time

Sincerely,

Outlaw-2(Tokyo Battalions)

Yay!! Updated! I am extremely glad that you updated, please update more! Nice story, ive always liked these "past future" type stories.

Don't flatter yourself, I can say for myself that I'm not a "yes-man" nor do I need "violent fixes." Anyone with a creative enough imagination with a strong background of research can right an action scene, it's the rest of the story that is/supports the flesh of the novel.

Like I said in earlier reviews, it's interesting, keep writing, update soon.

yay! u updated! btw, i didnt even kno there were format thingy errors. i guess i didnt notice because u changed it before i could see. i dont check this very often, for i was beginning to lose all hope of you ever updating. ok, maybe not that drastic, but yeah. i dont think there are any spelling errors in this. but u know what? "yor storie SUX!11"...jk :)i like eveyboddy!

hm... so far so good... no grammar mistakes... nth... nuh-uh... not crappy at all... u keep my curiousity growin...

wat'z otouto anyway?...

1) In response to your rant: I remember reading that chapter and it was properly formatted, because the format change didn't come until a little later, so alot of us read it in the correct format, just so you know ^_^.2)You're right, not much happened in this one, but it was a fun cliff-hanger and it's made me really desperate for the next chapter. I cannot wait!^_~Kayu

Vuunderful.

I like the chapter very much, and if I see errors I tell you, I am not a kind reviewer, for me to even review a story is an honor initself because I read over 50 chapters a day and only about 5 of them are reviewed.

OMG! you updated! I'm so glad. I thought maybe you were avoiding this story. It was a very good chapter, much like your others. But i must say, i enjoy your action scenes the most. I look forward to seeing another chapter so update soon. Oh and by the way, I found no mistakes. Great job!