hm...i liked the last part. *two thumbs up*

Different, is all I can really say.

It starts to sound more and more like a rap song. Cool.

Very good. Vived, yet metaphorical. Makes you think. I can relate to this very well. Good writing. If I tried to explain what I'm thinking I wouldn't make any sense, so this is all I'm going to say. Good Job.

;Mizery Rose

Cool.