I really don't know how to respond to this story. It is so beautiful. I love it, I wish there was much more. Please, keep writing things such as this.

Beautifully written and very descriptive. Done like a professional. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Very well written. Creative and descriptive; it was a joy to read. I'm definately reading the rest very soon. The plot so far (well, the prologue) was intriguing; I can't wait to read the rest and find out more about what happens in the age of the "gnarled old man," or whatever else comes in the second chapter.