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| XOMADCRAZZYOX 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseheyy, i just wanted to review this story cause it has a lot of meaning to me when i was in fifth grade my neighbor called me on the phone, shes a year older then my sister and she was looking for her, i told her my sister wasn't home and she asked me to come over her house, and i realized she had been crying. So i ran over and my sister was hanging out with the neighbors on her damn front lawn and i went inside and she was just a sobbing crying mess and i asked her what was wrong and she told me she had tried to kill herself and i was shocked and i gave her a huge hug and i cried with her ya know? but i always wondered what would have happened if i hadn't been home that day what she would have done, would she have gone outside and gotten my sister and embarass herself in front of the neighbors. or would she have done it... turns out some medicine she was taking was making her depressed. I dont think I could ever forget that day, ever in my whole life. Dana |
| emotionless heart 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was very powerful and effective. That just reminds me of how I'm always there for my friend. |
| total vintage 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abusewow, very powerful. well done. |
| Mythical Luver 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abusethat means a lot to me... i have a few friends who are kind-of suicidal... and one even had to go to a hospital... it means a lot to me because sometimes people think that friends are just people who you hang out with every once in a while... but that's not it... friends are people who need you, and vice versa... anyways, this was good... and this probably means a lot to plenty other people... |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseHave you ever been in a situation like that before? Do you mind if I e-mail it to abunch of my friends and start a chain letter possibly? It was really good! |
| Rylee Smith 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abuseTalk about a flashback. For me. This story made me remember last year when two of my friends were suicidal. Only one attempted to commit suicide more than once. The other one was convinced to stop. I just thank God that they didn't. That my friend mother came home before she could kill herself.I'm glad I was never in you position. You're incredibly brave to help your friend, and to share this with others. Keep writing. |
| Alt_Rock_Girl 2004-11-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful...just...Beautiful. I think I might cry. Its so well written, I felt like I was there. |
| aurora borealis 2004-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful and incredibly sad. I loved it. I feel so sorry for Cole. (I also know how it feels to lose a friend, and I wouldn't wish that on anyone.) |
| Fallen Oblivion 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI was so worried that he was going to do it...I actually bit my lip and got scared. Wow. You're message at the end is so true. I'm utterly speechless. |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-06-21 ch 1, | abusereally really powerful... very touching |
| snowtiger13731 2004-02-07 ch 1, | abuseOh my ** god. . . I'm crying hysterically right now. . . tears dripping and dripping down. There have been times when I've wanted to kill myself, and sometimes I just wish I had a friend like that. Oh my god. I'm crying so much. That was really good. -- julia |
| Elyse 2003-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my god.. this story i can't even explain it. My best friend tried killing herself twice and i always was there to shove my hand down her thorat or call the police.. unfortuneately our friendship broke up.. this story hits home.. but in a good way. |
| goddess-shinigami 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseomg...see me cry...that hit SO close to home...i need to go write now or i'm gunna turn into a bawling blob of pink hair and black eyeliner...lol thank you so much, i've been inspired... |
| ajcutie07 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abusei'm gonna cry... i've had friends want to kill themselves...heck i wanted to kill myself too... but my friend or i have ever come that close... sad story, happy ending... i liked it |
| Scarred Soul 2003-05-31 ch 1, | abusethat hit close to home. but only it was me who was suicidal and my friend saved me. But she didn't know about it at the time. It's a really good writing, u almost made me cry..scary. |