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| amanda 2003-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat stuff! only 2 chapters tho! patty i am sad. lol. well ur topic for the story is interesting...and that one girl "Car" seems...a lil bitchy, but hey...gotta have one of those kinds of ppl in da story! |
| dc-hypergrl 2003-02-28 ch 2, | abuse12 years old and she's totally obsesed with cars? Hm.. interesting girl. I'd say a girl after my own heart, but hehe. im a bit of a tom-boy.. much unlike what it seems in my stories. "E!" anyway.. very cool so far. i know some people like constructive criticisim (sp?) but i dont know if you do. so write back tell me if you want it or not cuz i got sum for ya. :) otherwise awesome story. and you said you wanted an idea, right? I'm guessing you're 12 or 13? anyway.. there's this girl who has to deal with a drug addicted dad and a mom who basically goes out every night with some guy (she's having an affair) and the chick bascially has to take care of her self. what do you think? I was gonna try it.. but i think you might like it. let me know.. |
| dc-hypergrl 2003-02-28 ch 1, | abuseOuch! "Car" hehe. sounds like a total BI*! She should go find new friends. Jr. H is big! |
| Hopeful Writer 2002-12-18 ch 1, | abuseHey, I told you I'd review! Wow, Carly makes a pretty bad friend. Suzie should dump her. She's not worth it. Update SOON! I can't wait to find out what happens when she meets DS! Bye -- HW |