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amanda
2003-07-19
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat stuff! only 2 chapters tho! patty i am sad. lol. well ur topic for the story is interesting...and that one girl "Car" seems...a lil bitchy, but hey...gotta have one of those kinds of ppl in da story!
dc-hypergrl
2003-02-28
ch 2,
abuse12 years old and she's totally obsesed with cars? Hm.. interesting girl. I'd say a girl after my own heart, but hehe. im a bit of a tom-boy.. much unlike what it seems in my stories. "E!" anyway.. very cool so far. i know some people like constructive criticisim (sp?) but i dont know if you do. so write back tell me if you want it or not cuz i got sum for ya. :) otherwise awesome story.

and you said you wanted an idea, right? I'm guessing you're 12 or 13? anyway.. there's this girl who has to deal with a drug addicted dad and a mom who basically goes out every night with some guy (she's having an affair) and the chick bascially has to take care of her self. what do you think? I was gonna try it.. but i think you might like it. let me know..
dc-hypergrl
2003-02-28
ch 1,
abuseOuch! "Car" hehe. sounds like a total BI*! She should go find new friends. Jr. H is big!
Hopeful Writer
2002-12-18
ch 1,
abuseHey, I told you I'd review! Wow, Carly makes a pretty bad friend. Suzie should dump her. She's not worth it.

Update SOON! I can't wait to find out what happens when she meets DS!

Bye -- HW
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