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Reviews For: Shattered Innocence
Not Just a Little Girl 2003-06-09 . chapter 1
WOW this is brilliantly written, and the formatting really enhances the effect!
Emryald 2002-12-04 . chapter 1
Ooh, I love it! *squee!*
Catalina Royce 2002-10-14 . chapter 1
Hmm...Go and submit it in your magazine. You seem to know what's good and what isn't. Perhaps, though, with the bold, in your 2nd last stanza, you could higlight the "Destroyed"....
BlackDragon7 2002-10-10 . chapter 1
really good poem
Wrong Name Tag 2002-10-05 . chapter 1
Awesome poem, I really like the last stanza. Excellent job!

-Jessie
Toad-Frog 2002-10-02 . chapter 1
Written very well! Good job! Read mine sometime and keep on writing!
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