This is possibaly one of the best stories I've read in my life, and I'm not joking. I hope you write more like this

WOW. That's good. Yeah, good.

Well, if I were to judge your holiday to Sydney by this story I would say that it relyy impressed you and you had a wonderful time. Sarcasim aside it was an okay story. Not being a vampire fan myself I'm nnot sure if I get everything you said but still I found it pretty good. Keep it up and I see at least one of us managed to write something a=on the holidays.

Different ... but nice. And so true. Please upload more stories, I love the way you write.