Nicely told story and a great introduction to your characters. I loved the banter between Lupa and the others, it sounds very natural. Most enjoyable.

evil fluffy slapper...BWAHAHA! I love it, Vlad and Lupa are really cute together. *slaps self to keep from stealing wonderfully written banter* You should really publish this stuff...I know I'd buy it!

*Grins* I really enjoyed this one, nice work Lupa!

I have to admit that I was dissapointed when it ended so soon (but that can only be to your credit) but you managed to get so much into this one, it was great.

The humour is great, well done and not over the top, but especially good is the strength of your characters and the way they interact. Great job!

Keep it up Lupa *plays fiddle and dances away to next Lupa and Vladimir story*

Veru interesting, but maybe it could use some back story? It seems obvious that I should know who theese people are. Some sort of cartoon maybe? Oh well, it's still interesting

I absolutely LOVE this story. I thought the characters of the three brothers were extremely well-developed in what was, in essence, quite a short story. You get a real sense of the vastly different personalities (still can't decide whether I love or hate Vervain, though), and the wonderful way they mesh when lumped together in a crisis - just like a proper family.

Oh, and Lupa was great, of course - but you already know I like her ; )

Read most of the poems you penned today - they all sound like they'd make great songs (albeit 80's soft rock songs - you should sell them to Diane Warren, you'd make a killing!)

*waves g'bye and bolts off 'cos she's spotted another one with Lupa and Vladimir in it*

". . . he owns a chain of all-night gymnasiums and is not afraid to use them."

(in 'comic store guy from the Simpsons' voice)

Best description ever.

This one was good! I liked it a lot. The desciptions were good and the story was nice. Once again, it was good. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!

hybrids! i like! hehe...Vladimir rules! Vervain reminds me of a charecter in one of my stories i haven't written fully yet ^-^ they all rule!

*giant cockroaches*. Oh, brother... That was what I needed for the rest of the day...

*his purple VW Beetle*. I love this guy. I have one of these too, but mine is black. Can I have him after you finish the story?

And I loved the little details about cooking. *His* cooking.

As for the difference between cats and dogs regarding water; hilarious. And very, very true.

I love this! And now I need ice cream...

PS
Thanks for the reviews.

In my excitement to get to chapter 5, it seems I forgot to review this chapter.

I am in love with Vervain. He is such a pain in the arse.

aw!! It's so damn GOOD! You write like published pro.


Now write another one!

You have got to read the Blake books. You have GOT to. Blake books = unlimited store of Vervain Mikkhails. What's more, they're all either vampire or wereanimals.

I love the names.

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Can I have a copy of this story when you're done?

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*anticipates return of sex-crazed maniac and genetically primitve other maniac*

This is the end @_@ wahh i wanted more, more Valadmir and Lupa.
Very well done, i love this a lot. I am also a fan of Anthro stories. Maybe you'll write a sequel or something. Valantin is definaltly an interesting character. Bunnies LOL.
By the way thanks for reviewing

Belle

*still laughing* that last line was brilliant. This is very well-written, with a combined sense of fantasty and humour ... excellent. I've gone as far as chapter 1, but planning to continue soon. I hope it stays this good ...