Reviews for Sixty Five Percent

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Amopet4 2005-10-18 ch 7,	abuseVery interesting story!Philosophical and deep, too...
jon-1308 2005-02-25 ch 7,	abuseAn intriguing story. Not too long but certainly gives you something to think about. I like it!
Ropponmatsu III 2003-12-02 ch 7,	abuseThis was a very interesting and original plot, but it had a pretty predictable ending. I like how you explained things in a philosophical way, especially since I'm in that mood after watching Neon Genesis Evangelion. If this was one of your earlyiest stories, I can only imagine how great you must be now. This was a great story and I enjoyed it a lot. Very, very interesting. Little Ropponmatsu
JEMak 2003-11-17 ch 7,	abuseWow. I LOVE this story! awed Man, you've got talent! Love how Andrea was spared, and her reaction to Martin&Co. ^_^ Oh, so cool!
eupseudes 2003-09-17 ch 7,	abuseVery meticulously thought out and executed. Very deep into human morals, I think this is one of the best philosophical works I have ever read. Your story reveals the complexities of human nature and why life becomes very boring when there are no problems because we find life interesting when there are problems-- Well, I think that was a very well done steak, and I applaud you, and you are quite different from all of us, and, umm, maybe I should stop praising you and get back to work. Yeah, that would be a good idea. Just wipe everyone off the face of earth and we don't have to worry about a thing. On a more serious note, I agree with you wholeheartedly. Oh, and good luck getting published!
IHJ 2003-09-10 ch 7,	abuseHm. A deep, philosophical story. Really takes a deep look at human nature. I like Andrea's evolution, so to speak, from a "scared, angry and alone" girl to who she is now and being more willing to LOOK at others, but...seems a bit too happy in this final chapter. shrug Either, I love this story. It's a fantastic, well-thought story. two thumbs up I applaud you. I hope you DO become published.
IHJ 2003-09-10 ch 6,	abuse"Pessimistic optimist". I love that part. So deep, you make us THINK! I'm glad I've happened upon this story on someone's Fav. Stories list (I think it was Ives) and see that there ARE mature, well-written stories in Fictionpress.com. The Beyonder's...guidance of her throughout this game has been fantastic.
IHJ 2003-09-10 ch 5,	abuseI love this chapter and how Andrea is developing. clapping my hands Great job.
IHJ 2003-09-10 ch 4,	abuseGreat story so far. I loved learning a bit of background of the...opportunity the Beyonder has the ability to give to others. It's getting more complicated. nod of head That's good.
IHJ 2003-09-10 ch 3,	abuseI never thought about how those who tell obscene jokes with those who don't like it present were sexual offenders. gulp of guilt Ah... Deep thinking so far with how there are conditions for each "sin/crime" Andrea thinks about.
IHJ 2003-09-10 ch 2,	abuseOh. Disturbing chapter. Unique plotline so far and I like how you give Andrea an attitude. Hoping future chapters show other sides to her personality. And the last line "Then this one will be interesting." is damn right spooky!
jevn 2003-07-03 ch 7,	abuseNice story. I liked the philisophical discutions that Andria had with the beyonder. Good good story! I'm not sure why but it was.
Endless Sorrow 2003-04-26 ch 7,	abuselike... WHOA. That totally blew me away. IMO, the ending wasn't really what I anticipated. A bit too optimistic/fantasy for me. But everything before that... WHOA. applaudes
Isay 2003-04-20 ch 7,	abuseThat was a great story. I loved it.
KodiaX987 2003-02-11 ch 7,	abuseExcellent story! Very creative concept and idea; never seen anything like it before.

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