 Tiefling 2004-09-17 . chapter 1This is great! Rhymes well, and it's funny. One question though- is the title a pun or a spelling mistake? I wondered, since you mispelled 'yay' in the summary. |
 A Bit of Old Parchment 2002-12-08 . chapter 1For some reason, I'm laughing. Don't ask why. .. "The farmer was buried and eaten by a slug"... No wonder it was published. People, a poet here! A poet! *points dramatically at BRC* |
 Yumi 2002-11-10 . chapter 1 Hey, can I have a ticket to fame too? Cause I am your friend *smiles broadly* and you wouldn't leavee me behind would you?? It is a great poem,(better than you couldv'e wrote says my vindictive litle consionce to me) it was really creative too, I mean I didnt know rabbits eat slugs! Did you? Looks around....*crickets chirp*.....Okay, see your really creative there! |
 Hestia5 2002-10-07 . chapter 1tis the circle of life yea! the slug isnt so lowly after all ::trys to look philosophical:: ::fails miserably:: ah well, it was good! yay for BRC! |
 Chloe 2002-10-06 . chapter 1Briliant, simple, yet some how catches the cycle between life, death and importance. With a good rhyming scheme included. Well done! |
 icegem 2002-10-06 . chapter 1hello! it's me! yay
I like this, i do, it's really odd (in a good way) It's good how you linked the slug with the farmer by eating him, yum. What book is it being published in?
Tata! |
 Black-Rein 2002-10-05 . chapter 1lol that was good. it reminds my of the circle of life |
 Luni Sedai 2002-10-05 . chapter 1IRONY!!!! /dies of the irony/
I know you'll think me crazy for this, you probably meant this to be gruesomely ironic, but i was laffing when i finished... mebbi it's sumthing to do with my lack of breakfast... o.O |