 Finwe 2006-03-30 . chapter 13No! I need more! This is turning out quite nicely! >*.* |
 Finwe 2006-03-30 . chapter 10O cool!! I have a black sword!! It's not really, really long, though. *depressed* But this is a neat story! I'm really enjoying it! ^^ KEEP UPDATING! |
 midnight 2004-12-28 . chapter 2 So no fair! I wanna kill popups too! then again. . .I'll just killed one. . .nevermind. Really intersting story (=^_^=) |
 SugarHighRejectWhoLovesAnime 2004-02-21 . chapter 1I'm back... MUAHAHAHAHAHA! 'TIS ME, KEMI! YOU SHALL SUFFER! Wha-? Oh... i'm not here to toture you until you wished you were dead... i'm reveiwing... *shrugs* Same difference. Anyway... nice story... very, very queer... for a 20 year old teacher, you sure have a strange mind red... anyway... LEAVE ME ALONE OR I WILL BLACKMAIL YOU! ...AGAIN! |
 Icy Mike Molson 2003-07-08 . chapter 13Well, obviously, I'm evil dude. After all, I have an army of Rouges... |
 Jay Lee 2003-04-23 . chapter 13I'm DONE!Congradulations for the nice story. although it is a bit odd. Keep it up you little weirdo ;) |
 Jay Lee 2003-04-23 . chapter 1... |
 Karma50 2003-04-18 . chapter 13 *wipes blood from Karma dagger* Yes, I wondered why Dream Eater said that. Action is good, so if you are the Red One and I am the Karismatic one? *flutters eyelashes* Yes I know it's spelt wrong. That was really good, a much needed bit of humour! |
 Chazbone 2003-04-18 . chapter 13Wow, what a great chapter Red. But practically everyone got a name like the insane_one or the Hyper_one. I didn't get a one! Wah!
Ok, I'm over that. Well once again really cool chatper. But you forgot to ask two questions, will you tell the controversial sentance on HG's appron? Also will Chazbone defeat Yasu? |
 lener 2003-04-17 . chapter 13yo! i'm here!
ALL RIGHT! my bow and quick wits rulez! lol... just kidding... heez
HAHAHAHHAA! i liked the part about HG shouting! heh!! ohh... so there are more good people in the castle... they ARE good, aren't they? lol... j/k ahahhaahhaa mini keychain! hahahahah!
sheesh! it's Darkshin! they've met each other! hahaha this story is just like Anime! i can picture all the movements!
why wouldn't red eat the muffins?
hahahahahah... uh oh! redlady' the evil One?? hahah! nice evil cough! oops, i mean laugh! hahaha! evil dude this way? HAHAHA! i'm sorry all i can do is laugh, so i hafta type 'haha's coz i can't transfer my laughter over to you in a voiced review... and your story is hilarious, it's making me laugh so i wanna type all my laughter in your review!
oops... gtg for breakfast! i'll continue this later! ahh decided not to eat after all! i wanna know what happens here!
OH! Yasu! tried to kill you! hahahahaha the swords r so darn funny!!
AH! THE EVIL DUDE'S WAITING FOR THEM AT THE TOP! THEY'RE WALKING RIGHT INTO DANGER!
UPDATE!
UPDATE! |
 The HG man 2003-04-17 . chapter 13Hey-O, ^_^
Hee,hee,hee,hee... This was another great chapter Red. ^_^
Oh, and don't worry, I wouldn't leave you out of the tea part (bakes Red a large batch of Chocolate chip cookies) ^_^
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter.
^_^
The ever ILLUSIVE, (and Charismatic)
Hyper Guyver ^_^ |
 The Nameless One 2003-04-17 . chapter 13Another great chapter. Cheers to the SW mention. ;) |
 Karma50 2003-03-03 . chapter 12Good as ever my friend.
I can really picture it now and you have captured my character so well!
And you've put my Karma dagger in, and yes I knew Rosie was evil!
Oh and "Not only do I have fire power.But I also know how to control the other elements aswell." ohh, Qualinesti, who's a bit full of themself?! Only joking of course.
Karma |
 Litehawk 2003-03-01 . chapter 12I make my last comments about this story, LOVE IT LADY, but one thing, I do not like crossbows, regular bows yes, but crossbow, puh-leez oy vey, and if i was stuck in a cage i would have done the only thing i know to do play my flute until i shatter the bars muhahahaha*breaks off as Litehawk is sedated in is padded home.* I promise to update my stories and get new ones soon, including one that includes all my school friends, and maybe even you. |
 Litehawk 2003-03-01 . chapter 11No! How can I be captured? Noo! Oh well, but, who is the evil dude? Can it really be you Redlady? |