No! I need more! This is turning out quite nicely! >*.*

O cool!! I have a black sword!! It's not really, really long, though. *depressed* But this is a neat story! I'm really enjoying it! ^^ KEEP UPDATING!

So no fair! I wanna kill popups too! then again. . .I'll just killed one. . .nevermind. Really intersting story (=^_^=)

I'm back... MUAHAHAHAHAHA! 'TIS ME, KEMI! YOU SHALL SUFFER! Wha-? Oh... i'm not here to toture you until you wished you were dead... i'm reveiwing... *shrugs* Same difference. Anyway... nice story... very, very queer... for a 20 year old teacher, you sure have a strange mind red... anyway... LEAVE ME ALONE OR I WILL BLACKMAIL YOU! ...AGAIN!

Well, obviously, I'm evil dude. After all, I have an army of Rouges...

I'm DONE!Congradulations for the nice story. although it is a bit odd. Keep it up you little weirdo ;)

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*wipes blood from Karma dagger* Yes, I wondered why Dream Eater said that. Action is good, so if you are the Red One and I am the Karismatic one? *flutters eyelashes* Yes I know it's spelt wrong. That was really good, a much needed bit of humour!

Wow, what a great chapter Red. But practically everyone got a name like the insane_one or the Hyper_one. I didn't get a one! Wah!

Ok, I'm over that. Well once again really cool chatper. But you forgot to ask two questions, will you tell the controversial sentance on HG's appron? Also will Chazbone defeat Yasu?

yo! i'm here!
ALL RIGHT! my bow and quick wits rulez! lol... just kidding... heez

HAHAHAHHAA! i liked the part about HG shouting! heh!! ohh... so there are more good people in the castle... they ARE good, aren't they? lol... j/k ahahhaahhaa mini keychain! hahahahah!

sheesh! it's Darkshin! they've met each other! hahaha this story is just like Anime! i can picture all the movements!

why wouldn't red eat the muffins?

hahahahahah... uh oh! redlady' the evil One?? hahah! nice evil cough! oops, i mean laugh! hahaha! evil dude this way? HAHAHA! i'm sorry all i can do is laugh, so i hafta type 'haha's coz i can't transfer my laughter over to you in a voiced review... and your story is hilarious, it's making me laugh so i wanna type all my laughter in your review!

oops... gtg for breakfast! i'll continue this later! ahh decided not to eat after all! i wanna know what happens here!

OH! Yasu! tried to kill you! hahahahaha the swords r so darn funny!!

AH! THE EVIL DUDE'S WAITING FOR THEM AT THE TOP! THEY'RE WALKING RIGHT INTO DANGER!
UPDATE!
UPDATE!

Hey-O, ^_^

Hee,hee,hee,hee... This was another great chapter Red. ^_^

Oh, and don't worry, I wouldn't leave you out of the tea part (bakes Red a large batch of Chocolate chip cookies) ^_^

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter.

^_^

The ever ILLUSIVE, (and Charismatic)

Hyper Guyver ^_^

Another great chapter. Cheers to the SW mention. ;)

Good as ever my friend.
I can really picture it now and you have captured my character so well!
And you've put my Karma dagger in, and yes I knew Rosie was evil!
Oh and "Not only do I have fire power.But I also know how to control the other elements aswell." ohh, Qualinesti, who's a bit full of themself?! Only joking of course.
Karma

I make my last comments about this story, LOVE IT LADY, but one thing, I do not like crossbows, regular bows yes, but crossbow, puh-leez oy vey, and if i was stuck in a cage i would have done the only thing i know to do play my flute until i shatter the bars muhahahaha*breaks off as Litehawk is sedated in is padded home.* I promise to update my stories and get new ones soon, including one that includes all my school friends, and maybe even you.

No! How can I be captured? Noo! Oh well, but, who is the evil dude? Can it really be you Redlady?