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Running
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Alessandra Lee PM
Boring title I know, but it's like my 6th poem uploaded tonight so i'm out of ideas. It's got pretty good descrpition and it's about running. Thinking about Xcountry when i wrote it. Please review.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 82 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-09-02 - Status: Complete - id: 1006882
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Lack of energy

Uneven breath.

Heart pumping faster

On an adrenaline rush.

Drowning in sweat

Salty on my face.

Cheeks flushed bright red

Face almost white.

Step left

Step right.

Ears aching

Legs so sore.

Concentration impossible

Head hurts to turn.

Almost finished

Almost done.

Arms start pumping

At a lightning-like pace.

Feet follow

With thunder's grace.

In once second it's over

Across the finish line.

Ready to burst into the stars

But I need to know my time.
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