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Harshest Critic
Look at that girl
Sheesh, what a mess
Lackluster hair pulled back in an unattractive bun
Bushy eyebrows and too high oily forehead
Still has a few zits, shouldn't that be over by now?
Too broad shoulders scarred from her scratching at her acne
On her hands, fingernails bitten to the quick and warts
Something of a Budda belly
Strech marks on her theighs
And, my goodness, what ugly feet
Not much to look at is she
What a screw up
No one would believe the twisted sick stuff that goes on behind those eyes
How many times has she lain in the shower and sobbed?
She's found the man she's going to marry and still can't stop
What is her problem. . .
As if crying would undo what she just did
It just lets her off her guilt cheap
She is shy
No, a coward
That's what she is
Scared to go to the checkout or order food by herself
Afraid to go around people she doesn't know
Starts shaking if she's in front of even a tiny crowd
She doesn't trust anyone
Always assumes the worst even when she has no reason to do so
Everything is a lie to her
She thinks everyone talks behind her back
Everyone hates her
If you don't act /perfectly/ towards her she thinks you hate her
One wrong word and bam!
You've broken her poor little heart
She messes up everything she touches
This girl cannot do anything right
Lets her siblings trash the house while she's off in a la-la land
Burns dinner to an inedible crisp
Totally goofs her lines
Couldn't dance to save her life
Better cover your ears if she starts to sing
Don't lend her anything, cause she'll completely destroy it
If she says she's gonna do something for you, be prepared to wait for a long time
Forgets to give presents at christmas and birthdays
Can't do anything on the computer
Complete slob
She ruins her own dreams!
Won't go the extra that it's gonna take
Expects things to just fall into her lap
And when she gets that chance
Blows it
She's ruined her life a thousand times over!
Screwup
Coward
Ugly
Two-faced
Wreck
Female dog. . .
That's what I think of the girl I'm looking at
In the mirror
She's looking back at me
Back into my eyes
I wonder. . .
What does she think of me?