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This was a poem that our teacher directed. We had to write things in a certain order and other people had to write lines, but I replaced them with my own. We were allowed to choose any topic we wanted and unicorns and other fantasy things give me an escape. Please tell me what you think of this. IADM
Fiery Unicorn
Fiery Unicorn
Flying in the sky
Against the cloudless blue
Running through the meadows
Swoosh
The unicorn laughs
Clouds clear and rainbows appear
Just as noon comes around
Beneath the trees
The mane is woven with flowers
It lives forever in dreams
Please review now. I promise I wont bite, hard. ;)