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For one thing, the people aren't in middle school anymore. They are on summer vacation when the story takes place, and will soon be Juniors. They are still friends, though Sam and Fiona have split up. They are still on good terms though.
For all of you who liked Michelle, I'm sorry but I kicked her out in my next story. I want all of my characters to be able to have something to do, and it was jut too hard to split the glory out. She didn't disappear; I gave her an excuse, so it's not totally unexpected.
The mystery is more serious this time, and the characters are growing up and getting more involved in various things.
The story is still in Fiona's point of view, but she is acting (and thinking) more like a teenager.
In this story, I didn't really know what I was doing. Now I am more familiar with mysteries and how to write a good one.
I am trying very hard to make the next story more enjoyable, so I won't be updating as much as I was. I have a lot of chapters already written, but it's not done.
I am going to fix it up, and post it soon.
It is dedicated to Ivygreen and Wendy. Ivygreen for never failing to review, and to Wendy who gave me the idea to write another. Wendy, I hope your happy with your character, as I made her the comic relief. Oh, and Ivygreen, I kind of 'stole' a character from you from one of your stories. Well it actually isn't yours, but you inspired me to put it in. I will post a little header telling you that this is the chapter that it's in. See if you know who and where it is from and which name I put it under.
Ok, that's it! Next story coming soon!