I've lost my weight.
No idea where it's gone
It seems to have vanished
Without telling any one.
My clothes miss it dearly;
They sag down in sorrow,
Where once was my stomach
There's now a big, empty hollow.
Once upon a time;
I was happy with my size,
When I looked in the mirror
Proudness seeped from my eyes,
But slowly and surely,
My weight crept away
Transforming me bitterly
To the stick figure today.
At first no-one noticed,
They all seemed much slimmer,
So I set about dieting,
To make me much thinner.
Yet no one would comment,
On how great I looked,
So I carried on with apples;
Until I was hooked.
The scales would lie to me,
They'd call me six stone
So I still carried on
Till I only weighed bone.
When others noticed
It was far too late.
My body was scrawny
And filled me with hate.
They tried to help me;
To lend me some food.
But I'd tell them to bug off
And shriek something rude.
So now friends have joined it,
In this game of hide and seek
I wonder if they'll notice
When I'm not here next week.
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hee hee ^_^ a bit depressing but hey. You see I wrote it for a friend, and
I hope I got my point across. I know that when you use rhyming couplets it
can take away the seriousness of the poem, but in this case it felt
compulsory. Please tell me what cha think! ^_^
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