Hi! Please tell me how you like this. I'm thinking about using it for a major school project. Reviews appreciated!

Life is long and lonely
there's no one to take your hand
and you feel like you're the only
one who doesn't understand.
You don't loose hope
sleep through the night
yet somehow you still know it will never be
never be right.

Planning out your future
you know where you want to go
but it's in the laws of nature
there's so much that you don't know.
You'll face your fears
follow the light
yet somehow you still know it will never be
never be right.

Look for what you're needing
one can win it if one tries
but beware your anger breeding
there's no consolation prize.
You'll hold your ground
fight the good fight
and it's only then that everything will be
yes, it will be right.