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Snow
IceAngelDarkMoon
I got the inspiration while walking in the snow. I really do love the snow and winter. I just hope someone else out there does too!
I knew it was going to snow, I could smell it,
The air is always so crisp before it snows.
I love to just watch the flakes journey down.
They play a sort of tag with each other,
They float most likely to their death to melt into nothing
But yet they come and still more follow.
The black night sky is best for seeing them
I stand alone in the falling pieces of heaven
They are so beautiful with the night as their background.
They catch in my eyelashes and hair.
I laugh; there is no one there to care.
I can’t resist the desire to twirl in the snow.
My nose tingles with the cold that nips at it.
My ears and fingers are numb, but I don’t care.
The snow is something special to me.
It is so like me cold and bitter,
But when you marvel at it, it dances for you.
The snow on my cheek melts and rolls off like a tear,
The only thing as close to perfect as watching snow fall,
Is to be the first to walk in the snow,
You are the one choosing the path; no one has gone before you,
Others may follow you, but you were still first.
I think there really are two snowflakes that are the same,
The dance to the earth is their one chance to find each other.
I wonder if they did or if they died before they found their match.
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