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Rain
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Shadow Link PM
Just thoughts on the title, rain. Review please, as this is my first and most likely only poem; as well as I would like to better myself in writing poems (if possible).
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 120 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 02-13-03 - id: 1235973
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A.N. - I just wanted to post something under original fiction, and this is the idea I came up with. Read, enjoy, and review please.

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Rain..

A sense of gloom fills the air as you stand in its midst, Letting it pelt you as if you don't care.

It runs down your face.

A shroud surrounds you, Like a cold blanket.

It soaks through your clothes.

Your thoughts are empty, The deepness of the rain's shroud consumes your mind.

It fills your shoes.

A strong wind blows, The clouds part away.

The rain is gone, As fast as it came _________

A.N. - I'm not the best at poetry, but I wanted to try it out. Review please. : )
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