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Hey there, thanx in advance for reading my lyrics. This song was posted a while ago under a different pen name, but I’m starting a new one here, and thought I’d re-post this song, seeing as how it got such wonderful reviews last time. Please review, it makes me smile ;)
"Crimson" (lyrics by: me (Jenny Rocker), and they ARE copyrighted for you knowledge)
Green skin clawed to shreds
Black eyes in her head
Hears a whisper in the air
Telling her that someone's there
Take a breath, inhale a sip
The blood drips off her fingertips
Broken glass and shards of stone
Crimson pools and bits of bone
You'll go on, but only alone
You're half way to hell,
A long way from home
Pale skin stained with red
Black and blue all on her legs
Feels a chill upon her flesh
Cherry stains her cobalt dress
Hears a scream escape her lips
The blood drips off her fingertips
Broken glass (etc. etc.)
You're one step from hell,
a long way from home
Broken glass and shards of stone
Crimson pools and bits of bone
All pave the path to your own home
Swallow it down your cover's blown
Escapes a whisper in a rage
Watch my breath you will obey
Inhale a breath and take a sip
The blood drips off your fingertips
The liquid glows, it's strong and thick
So drink it down and do it quick
Broken glass (etc. etc.)
You're one step from hell,
You're one step from home
So what’dya think? Good? Bad? Scary? Tell me in a review!
AND this song is up on if you want to actually hear it too! (/nicolefulton)