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Author: Maiden of the Stars
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/General - Reviews: 127 - Published: 02-26-03 - Updated: 10-06-03 - id:1244908

Appendix

A. Important Characters


Taylor Kyle Smith/ Valndi Kaitaki
-Age: 15/ 30
-B-Day: May 24
-Hair Color: Light blonde (short)
-Eye Color: Dark teal
-Race: Half-elf (Wood Elf)
-Build: Average
-Weapon: Light Stone (Sword and Magic)
-Appearance: Wears a light green t-shirt. Wears baggy blue jeans and brown boots. His gloves are cut off at the beginning of the finger and extend to below the elbow.
-Biography: Born while his mother was fleeing the Kabukaian government for raping the king, she tried to raise him. When he was eight months old, she placed him on the doorstep of Yamato Kaitaki's doorstep then threw herself in the river. Yamato took him in, knowing that he was his son from a note his mother had left. Kyela, his wife, earnestly agreed with Yamato to raise him as their own. When he was ten, in Kabukaian standards, Kyela had Lauren. At the same time, the castle came under attack from a rebel group, still loyal to the dead King Suoucon. Yamato sent him and his sister away to Earth, so that they could be safe from harm and return when things have quieted. After arriving, the person who was supposed to take care of him was killed. Scared and alone, Taylor/ Valndi ran to the first house he came to. There, the couple took him in. When he was in the sixth grade, his "father" passed away and he learned that he had been adopted. Since then, he had slowly distanced himself from others, becoming an outcast and a loner.
-Personality: A bit immature, but honest and trustworthy, he used to like being alone. He asks questions and can be friendly, but is usually quiet. He doesn't have much self-confidence.

Salyti Elentir
-Age: 98
-B-Day: June 21
-Hair Color: Sky blue (to shoulder)
-Eye Color: Forest green to Neon yellow (depends on emotions)
-Race: Half-elf
-Build: Bony
-Weapon: Element Stone (Magic, Shield and Sword) and staff
-Appearance: Wears a kimono-like forest green robe, with a white one beneath it. The layer beneath that, he wears a heavy black t-shirt. Beneath that, is a white t-shirt and white baggy shorts. He wears gray boots and caries a staff, sometimes.
-Biography: He was an experiment of mixing of several different races, before he was conceived. He was born the second child of the Elentir family, first of the Matin family. His human father was abusive to his mother and him; his elven mother was too weak to do anything, but quietly endured it. When he was twenty-five, his father left them. The villagers chased them to the edge of town, not wanting them living in town. At age thirty-five, the village experienced a fire, caused by a dragon. The fire destroyed the village and killed everyone, except Salyti. Salyti was left burned and beat up, on the verge of death, when a man came along and found him. He was the master of the Element Stone. He took Salyti in and trained him. His master was cruel to him, and only taught him to be untrusting and cold to other people. When Salyti passed his master's power and skill, the stone accepted Salyti as its bearer; his master was infuriated and chased him away at age fifty. Salyti then became a wanderer, believing there was no place for him and he was an outcast. His strength steadily increased, until he was the strongest person on the planet.
-Personality: Normally quiet and reserved, he doesn't like to talk about his painful past. He's determined to get whatever he starts done, yet is sensitive to the needs of others. He's honest and has good intentions for everything. Despite his pacifist nature, he will fight and defend himself and others.

Gwaihir Tabyoukai
-Age: 400
-B-Day: December 17
-Hair Color: Red (long)
-Eye Color: Gray
-Race: Half-Dragon (Fire)
-Build: Muscular
-Weapon: Heavy Blade/ Beast Stone
-Appearance: A bit rugged, he wears all black. Black t-shirt, black pants, black mountain boots and a black cape that's torn along the bottom. His red hair is tied back and his blade hangs at his side, for quick and easy deployment.
-Biography: He was the only child of his parents, the royal family of the dragons. He was a cheerful and tranquil child, trying to live in peace with everyone, though he was picked on for being "weak" because he was quite emotional. His mother and father were very protective of him, training him in fighting, reading and writing. When he was sixty-one, the Great War started. During the war, when the dragons were "wiped out," he was separated from his parents, only to watch them be killed. He also witnessed the slaughter of hundreds of his kind, even his only friend, Xena. At the end of the Great War, he was found and taken to the Wood Elves' castle, since they were now in control. There, King Doucon banished him to the dungeon, where he spent a hundred and eighty-nine years of his life in chains. Yamato, the king's son, often would come down to visit him, bringing food to eat. They became friends, quickly. Yamato's older brother, Lenleth, knew of him. When Lenleth began his experiments, he used Gwaihir as a guinea pig for thirty-seven years. After that, while Lenleth was being controlled, Gwaihir became the first pawn during an experiment. For a sixty-three years, he was controlled by a demon and forced to do horrible things.
-Personality: He's sympathetic, kind and caring, despite his horrible past. He likes to be at peace with everything, not really holding any grudges. He gets defensive and nervous when he feels something is about to happen. He's usually cheerful and forgiving, though it's unusual for the dragon race to be.

Kenji Kamijaria
-Age: 19
-B-Day: September 5
-Hair Color: Blonde (long)
-Eye Color: Violet
-Race: Human
-Build: Slightly muscular
-Weapon: Swords
-Appearance: He wares a green muscle shirt and brick red pants, with a purple cape, ripped along the bottom. A huge sword is at his hip, with regular shoes.
Biography: Born in a political family, Kenji's father wanted to remain mayor. In order to remain mayor, Lenleth came up with a deal. Kenji's mother was taken by Lenleth in exchange for Kenji's father being the mayor. Kenji was very lonely and sometimes cried himself to sleep. His only friend was Timothy, or Timmy, an older boy of his father's secretary. When he was seven, Lenleth came back, because his mother had died. Instead of giving up his title of mayor, Kenji's father agreed for a demon to take control of Kenji. The demon was five times the age of Kenji and much more cruel. He abused Timmy, almost daily. Instead of leaving Kenji, Timmy stayed, enduring the abuse. When Kenji was fifteen, he began to date every girl in town. He'd change girls every week, leaving each of them abused and heartbroken. After a year, he turned to boys and raped Timmy. At age 18, he left his home, to start his work for Lenleth. A few weeks before his nineteenth birthday, he met Salyti, who "saved" him from a group of vampires.
-Personality: Quite friendly and bubbly, he aspires to be a great swordsman. He lives by a code of honor, said to be handed down from generation to generation of his family. He's pretty honest, only lying when afraid to hurt someone's feelings.

Kiram Elbon
-Age: 124
-B-Day: October 31
-Hair Color: Jet-Black (long)
-Eye Color: Hot Pink
-Race: Drow
-Build: Skinny
-Weapon: Bow
-Appearance: A tight green t-shirt and shorts. One side of the shorts are cut up to above her thigh and the other side is above her knee. She doesn't wear shoes.
-Biography: Twin sister of Chrisayuokai, she had always been outgoing and friendly. At school, she usually got along with everyone and was very persuasive. Her closest friend was her brother, who she nicknamed "Chris." When she was 90, she became involved in a rebel group, who was bent on changing the whole drow culture. This group was largely influenced by other elven cultures, Lenleth being the main reason. At 95, she became the leader of the group, and was renown as the strongest drow. At 97, her group started a coup ‘d tat, which failed a year later. Because of this, the goddess of the drows, Logoth, sentenced her to exile and placed a red spider-shaped mark on her back. After fleeing the drow lands, she came upon a group of wood elves, who helped her get settled and start a new life. She lived in a halfway house, where she took in weary travelers, taking care of them.
-Personality: Really friendly, she likes to make friends. She has no problem making friends, and is pretty honest to her feelings and to others. Kind of nosy and somewhat picky, she's claims to have a "woman's intuition."

Chrisayuokai "Chris" Elbon
-Age: 124
-B-Day: October 31
-Hair Color: Jet-Black (short)
-Eye Color: Deep Royal Purple
-Race: Drow
-Build: Average
-Weapon: Bow and Arrow
-Appearance: Similar to Gwaihir's clothing yet he likes the color red.
-Biography: Twin brother of Kiram, he was always quiet. At school, he was feared and left alone, because he had developed sort of a split personality. When he was 98, Kiram led a failed coup, which led to her being exiled. Angry with this, he vowed that he would get stronger and make a way for Kiram to come back into the drow lands. He trained, day and night, and became the second most powerful drow, after his sister, leading him to an even lonelier life. At 114, Lenleth began taking over the drows. When Lenleth captured his family, Lenleth made a deal with him. Lenleth promised that he wouldn't hurt Chris' family, as long as Chris pledged his eternal support of him. To this, Chris agreed and became the top official in Lenleth's army.
-Personality: His personality is split in two. One side is a gentle, kind and quiet side; the other a cold, uncaring creature. He has little control over his personality, though the quiet Chris is the real him. His family is the only thing worth living for, in his mind, and will do anything for his older twin.

Yamato Kaitaki
-Age: 200
-B-Day: June 22
-Hair Color: Red-brown (really short)
-Eye Color: Deep Sea Blue
-Race: Half-elf (Wood)
-Build: Average
-Weapon: Swords and Magic
-Appearance: Wears an aristocratic outfit with a cape. The color of his clothes is usually blue, because it was his wife's favorite color.
-Biography: Was born the fifth child of the royal family, a product of an affair. King Suoucon killed his mother, when she was begging him to take Yamato and raise him. Yamato was left to die in the snow, but a couple of guards came and found him. It was then that the affair was exposed to the whole family. King Suoucon ordered the guards to throw Yamato in the river, but Lenleth persuaded him not to do so. Yamato grew up, very lonely and abused by the royal family. Lenleth would try and stop his parents and older siblings from hurting him. At age twenty-five, he met Kyela, a kitchen worker at the castle. They became best friends, secretly meeting in the rose garden everyday. When Yamato turned 120, King Suoucon attacked him. In his defense, Yamato injured the king, severely. Yamato believed the injury killed his father, but Lenleth had actually killed the king. After Yamato became king, he began changing all of the laws that his father had put on the people. Upon turning 150, he married Kyela, who he had been dating for several years. Five years later, he was found raped and almost dead on the side of the road. That was when Valndi was born. He found Valndi on his doorstep, with a note, explaining to him about the child and that she was going to commit suicide. Kyela agreed with him to raise Valndi as their own and avoid the hardship that Yamato had to face. Ten years later, Lauren was born. Two years later, the castle came under attack by a rebel organization, still loyal to King Suoucon's way of ruling. Yamato decided the best thing to protect his children was to send them to another planet. During the rest of the years, he has been trying to settle the disputes between the different races, hoping one day his children can return to a peaceful planet.
-Personality: Really friendly and acts sort of immature. He pushes himself to past his limits, sometimes is extremely stubborn and likes to get things done and over with. When in trouble, he's extremely serious and becomes the leader-like figure he is. He reacts to things pretty emotionally, and is not ashamed of his emotions. He does everything he can for the people that he's ruling.

Lenleth Kaitaki

-Age: 324
-B-day: February 14
-Hair Color: Light brown (short)
-Eye Color: Sky Blue
-Race: Wood Elf
-Build: Slightly Muscular
-Weapon: Spears and Bow/ Arrow
-Appearance: Usually wears outfits with unique designs on them. Long, tight fitting pants are his preference, and likes to wear deep shades of green.
-Biography: Born the fourth child of the Kaitaki family, he grew up, being viewed by his father as the "perfect child." At the time he was born, a decree was passed by the king that announced the last child born into the royal family, with royal blood, will become the king. Lenleth, however, was interested in science and advancement of it, becoming quickly bored by politics and laws. Electricity and how it worked fascinated Lenleth. By the age fifty, he had built several machines, which were powered by electricity. His inventions and advancements in the science realm amazed scholars. Ten years later, King Suoucon destroyed his machines and forced Lenleth to study law. Lenleth practically refused to do so, locking himself in his room for days. At age a hundred and twenty-four, Yamato "appeared" on their doorstep. This was when Lenleth found out about his father's affair, and was actually happy that Yamato was born. King Suoucon ordered Yamato to be thrown into the river, but Lenleth persuaded his father to keep Yamato. King Suoucon, extremely upset that Yamato was born, let Lenleth name him. For the next hundred years, Lenleth would be extremely protective of his younger brother, saving him many times from their family. During this time, Lenleth became interested in the medical field, as well as rebuilding his lifelong dream. At age two hundred and twenty-four, Lenleth found out that King Suoucon had tried to kill Yamato, and once again went to his rescue. After he had taken care of Yamato, he killed his father, making Yamato king. Lenleth married a silvan elf girl, five years later. After five years, Lenleth disappears with Gwaihir to a small island to the northwest of Teninton. It is then, he begins his experiments. Kyle Matin shows up on his island, at age two hundred and forty-four, with a group of demons, capturing Lenleth. For eighty years, Matin used a mind control device to control Lenleth, ultimately making Lenleth sell his youngest son into slavery and murder the rest of his family, except his daughter.
-Personality: Very quiet and reserved, he doesn't speak much. When he does speak, it's usually something very important, of great value, or just to speak his mind. He's very loyal and noble, not hesitating to help someone in need, due to the fact that he helped his brother out of many situations.

B. Minor Characters


Mrs. Smith
-Age: 42
-Race: Human
-Eye Color: Blue
-Hair Color: Brown
-Appears: Beginning
-Mini Biography: Taylor's adopted mom, her husband died, leaving her three children. She works to jobs to pay the bills, and she's obsessed with cleaning.

Jenna Smith
-Age: 18
-Race: Human
-Eye Color: Green
-Hair Color: Brown
-Appears: Beginning
-Mini Biography: Taylor's “sister.” She loves to talk and owns Fluffy (the cat.) Average hyper teenager.

Scott Smith
-Age: 21
-Race: Human
-Eye Color: Hazel
-Hair Color: Brown
-Appears: Beginning
-Mini Biography: A bum, who only stays out late and “plays loud music.” He's Taylor's older “brother.”

Mei Sing
-Age: 15
-Eye Color: Purple
-Hair Color: Black
-Appears: Beginning
-Mini Biography: Taylor's crush, in the beginning.

Grandpa Jim
-Age: 87
-Race: Human
-Eye Color: Gray
-Hair Color: Gray
-Appears: After bridge scene
-Mini Biography: Works at an inn with his wife, Kenji never really had much contact with him.

Kaitee Kaitaki
-Age: 355
-Race: Wood Elf
-Eye Color: Blue
-Hair Color: Brown
-Appears: Town near Yamato's castle
-Mini Biography: Yamato's older brother, who has dedicated himself to helping the dragons.

Kirgo
-Age: 350
-Race: Weather Dragon
-Eye Color: Gray
-Hair Color: Green
-Appears: Cottage
-Mini Biography: A weather dragon, who's family was in service to the Tabyoukai family for centuries.

Halere
-Age: 331
-Race: Water Dragon
-Eye Color: Green
-Hair Color: Blue
-Appears: Cottage
-Mini Biography: A dragon who was born after the Great War, he had become Taylor's friend during Taylor's stay.

Simetre
-Age: 500
-Race: Light Dragon
-Eye Color: Blue
-Hair Color: White
-Appears: Cottage
-Mini Biography: A serious light dragon, who studied medicine and became a doctor. He's the eldest of the clan.

Mahyia

-Age: 85
-Race: Aquatic Elf
-Eye Color: Gray
-Hair Color: Green
-Appears: End
-Mini Biography: A shy water elf princess, who seems to be fond of Salyti.

C. The Kabukaian Language

*Every English word is written backwards.

cat = tac
approve = evorppa
He ran after his friend = Le nar retfa sih dneirf

*Simple words, like "a," "we" and "the," are their Spanish equivalent backwards.

English Spanish Kabukaian I Yo Oy You Tu Ut He El Le She Ella Alle It Usted Detsu We Nosotros Sortoson Ya'll Vosotros Sortosov You all Ustedes Sedetsu **Them Ellos Solle
**a un nu **an una anu **the el le and y y

**these words have a feminine and masculine meaning in Spanish. Therefore, I have taken first the masculine form, first, then the feminine form, if needed.

D. Kabukaian History

YEAR EVENT

1000 The planet is found by elves fleeing other planets, because of constant living in fear of humans. The first elves were the silvan elves. The next, were the aquatic elves, who live in harmony with the silvan elves. The wood and light elves came third, then the ice and desert elves. Last, came the drows.
950 Dragons arrive on the planet
913 Many smaller races are found living on the planet, such as unicorns, fairies, vampires and werewolves.
900 The Dark War. This was started by the drows, in an failed effort to take over the world.
898 Humans arrive on the planet
882 The continent, Teninton, was found in the middle of the ocean.
876 The Dark War ends, with the drows being confined to scattered places around the world. The drows suffered the biggest lost, losing almost half of their population.
864 The first government was founded by the wood elves on Teninton.
845 A central government is founded, by the dragon race. Each race had equal amount of land and say in the laws.
755 A scientific lab, started by the dragons, is born. This lab's purpose was to learn more about the planet and natural resources.
567 The Sorcerer's Realm is founded by a multitude of humans, masters of the mysteries and powers of magic. This begins the sorcerer race, a reserved group who keeps the world in balance. They fight off evil and help with the common people.
0 The wood elves start rising up against the dragons. Gwaihir Tabyoukai was born.
50 Several hundred wood elf protesters are killed in front of the royal palace. This leads to growing anger in the wood elves, who begin taking over territories belonging to other races.
61 The Great War. This war is seen as a war between the wood elves and every other race in the world; however, the super continent was only affected. Teninton wasn't affected by anything. It starts by the slaughter of humans, in the southeast. After the defeat, the wood elves set their strict laws on the people.
82 The Sorcerer's Council decides not to get involved.
98 Wood elves attack the drows and light elves.
110 Wood elves attack the silvan elves, reducing their population to a quarter of what it was.
112 A group of dragons attack the wood elves, but are slaughtered.
118 Wood elves attack land regions, where aquatic elves had been living. This forces the aquatic elves to stay in the water, inhabiting only small islands and parts of Teninton.
124 Second attempt by the dragons, but it failed.
130 First defeat of the wood elves, by the desert elves.
133 Second defeat, by the ice elves.
134 A war pact is signed between the ice, desert and wood elves. They're called the Emertxe group, because of the extreme differences of living conditions.
134 Third attempt by the dragons, this time, successful.
144 Fourth attempt by dragons, another success.
151 Emertxe attacks the dragons, head on. The leader of the group is Doucon Kaitaki.
161 The Great War ends. All dragons are reported to have died in the war. Doucon takes the throne, successfully. Wood elves demolish the boundaries set up by the dragons, giving themselves full reign over the land, except in the Arctic and desert regions. Wood elves secretly confine Gwaihir to the dungeon.
162 Stones are created by The Sorcerer's Council and scattered throughout world.
163 King Doucon places his first set of laws on the people.
173 King Doucon is murdered by his only son, Suoucon.
176 Humans declare their independence from wood elves, and crown their first king, Jontahan Uramihsi.
177 Heavier laws are placed, and stricter tax laws. The boundaries are redrawn and whole populations of people are moved.
198 Rumors of an affair between King Suoucon and a human woman start to spread.
200 Word of an affair King Suoucon had is rampant. Yamato Kaitaki was born.
276 Chrisayuokai and Kiram Elbon are born.
300 Yamato injures King Suoucon; Lenleth kills him without Yamato knowing. Yamato is crowned king.
302 Salyti Elentir was born. A small battle between the silvan elves and the wood elves ensue, but the wood elves won. In turn, the wood elves of the area oppress the silvan elves more, by taking more land. Yamato is not told about this battle.
310 Gwaihir is taken from his prison and the experiments begin.
327 Kaihai (Salyti's half-brother) becomes the head of the Sorcerer's Realm, making him the first and only elven sorcerer.
337 A fire dragon (Gwaihir) appears at a village, destroying it. Two people survive.
369 Yamato was found half-dead and believed to have been raped.
370 Valndi Kaitaki was born.
371 Valndi's mother commits suicide and Yamato takes him in.
374 Kiram is exiled by Logoth, for trying to overthrow the drowian culture and government.
381 Kenji Kamijaria is born. Father makes deal with Lenleth. Quafei Uramihsi of the humans rises to the throne, in a bloody overthrowing of his father.
388 Kenji was taken over by demon.
400 Yamato's 200th birthday is celebrated, as almost a holiday. A representative from every race came to the castle, to talk about rerouting the boundaries and making laws fair for everyone. Kenji, Salyti and Taylor start out from a small house, outside of Misty Forest. Kiram joins the group, as they make for the next town. After a few days at the inn, because of Taylor's illness, they leave and meet Gwaihir. Salyti frees Gwaihir from the demon controlling him, in the Forest of Illusions. This is when the castle is invaded by Lenleth, taking King Yamato and a few others hostage, killing the others. After a night at Salyti's village, they continue on, and meet Chris. Taylor becomes captured, and Salyti rescues him, by giving himself over. The group travels on, stopping at a small town, right outside of the castle, for the night. Gwaihir transforms into his dragon form, and the group is taken to the cottage, where all the other dragons live. The next day, they arrive at the castle. After camping out, Kenji and Taylor start into the castle. Kiram and Kenji free the Elbon Family, while Taylor meets Lenleth. Matin is revealed as the person controlling everyone, and he is killed. Taylor finds out he is actually Valndi and Salyti meets Mahyia. Taylor is transported home, with the new ability to make portals.


E. Important Races

Aquatic Elves
-Range of Hair Color: light blues to light greens
-Range of Eye Color: deep green to gray
-Physical Features: Webbing between fingers and toes. They're slender and delicate.
-Usual Clothing: usually something very light and tight fitting. Mainly very revealing clothes. They don't wear shoes.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: they're pretty shy towards other races, especially since The Great War tore their communities apart. They don't get along every well with the wood elves, but respect the silvan elves for keeping their shores clean.
-Religion: God, Hanyti

Demons
-Range of Hair Color: white to black
-Range of Eye Color: red to yellow
-Attitude Toward Other Races: they despise all races. They're known to sometimes ally with dwarves, when they try to invade the elven lands. They don't mind humans, thinking they're pretty stupid.
-Religion: Los, Mono, Zarna

Desert Elves
-Range of Hair Color: from light brown to almost black
-Range of Eye Color: gray to black
-Usual Clothing: something that is loose fitting and light material. They don't need shoes, being adapted to the hot sand and climate.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: cautious, but friendly. They like to trade and offer help to people, but they know that people can hurt them and keep a close eye on them.
-Religion: Finar

Dragons
-Attitude Toward Other Races: cautious, but usually friendly. They trade, offer help, and sometimes form alliances with other races. Since the Great War, the dragon race has become pretty cautious of who they befriend.
-Religion: Usually Alamar, but many worship God.

*Dark Dragons
-Hair Color: Blacks
-Eye Color: Black
-Usual Clothing: Usually dark clothing, very tight.

*Fire Dragons
-Hair Color: Red to Orange
-Eye Color: Yellow
-Usual Clothing: Bright colors, they tend to dress pretty casually

*Light Dragons
-Hair Color: Yellow to White
-Eye Color: Light Blues and Purples
-Usual Clothing: Pastel colors and long robes. Their outfits have designs and are beautifully woven.

*Water Dragons
-Hair Color: Blues
-Eye Color: Greens
-Usual Clothing: Usually don't wear much clothing. They usually wear bathing suit-type clothing.

*Weather Dragons
-Hair Color: Greens
-Eye Color: Grays
-Usual Clothing: Tight clothing that is light in color.

Drows
-Range of Hair Color: Black to White, usually black
-Range of Eye Color: Purples, Pinks and Reds
-Usual Clothing: dark colors to better hide in shadows.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: They hate every race, especially the elven races. They're a little open to humans, but it's not very likely they'll get involved in wars between other races.
-Religion: Los, Logoth

Dwarves
-Range of Hair Color: blonde to brown
-Range of Eye Color: hazel to black
-Usual Clothing: anything suited for mining
-Attitude Toward Other Races: they despise elves, except for the light elves. They're good with humans, and will trade their minerals and ores with them for weapons and supplies.
-Religion: Futh

Half-Elves
-Range of Hair Color: depends on the races combined
-Range of Eye Color: depends on the races combined
-Usual Clothing: depends on area of residency
-Attitude Toward Other Races: most are weary of elves, for fear of not being accepted by them. They usually live in human circles, because they fit in the most with them. Usually they're loners, being accepted nowhere.
-Religion: depends on area of residency

Humans
-Range of Hair Color: All
-Range of Eye Color: All
-Usual Clothing: A style that looks medieval.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: they're pretty weary of elves, for fear that they might try and take them over. They get along well with dwarves and invite half-elves in. They're weary of demons, though they sometimes accept them.
-Religion: Any or all demigods and demigoddesses

Ice Elves
-Range of Hair Color: White to green
-Range of Eye Color: red to black
-Usual Clothing: long sleeves, snow boots and long pants. Their clothing has designs on it, to tell of which social status they are.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: They don't usually get along well with other races. They're afraid of change and will not do anything "out-of-the-ordinary." Festivals are only held to their god, in which a captive from war or an adventurer will be sacrificed.
-Religion: Finar

Light Elves
-Range of Hair Color: Blonde to light brown
-Range of Eye Color: Browns
-Usual Clothing: Beautiful and skillfully made dresses of rich material. They dress very properly and richly, almost like kings and queens. They wear handcrafted sandals and high boots.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: They avoid everyone, thinking they are not of their higher intellect. They consider themselves the purest race out of all, all the other races are like mutts to them. Dwarves are welcomed into the cities, because of their ores and minerals. Every other race is shunned from their cities.
-Religion: Anul, Juhenia

Silvan Elves
-Range of Hair Color: Blonde to dark brown
-Range of Eye Color: Dark blues to dark greens
-Usual Clothing: anything that's comfortable and usually goes barefooted.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: Though they've almost been destroyed, they're on good terms with other races, being very hospitable and kind. They're on good terms with aquatic elves, because they had taken good care of their surroundings.
-Religion: God

Unicorns
-Range of Hair Color: White to Rainbow
-Range of Eye Color: Any color
-Attitude Toward Other Races: Very shy, they're only said to appear to virgin maidens lost in the woods or to people doomed to die. They do help, when needed, but usually keep to themselves deep in forests.
-Religion: None

Wood Elves
-Range of Hair Color: Blondes, Reds, and Browns
-Range of Eye Color: Greens, Browns and Grays
-Usual Clothing: Something light, so they can run fast in the woods. They wear boots and shoes.
-Attitude Toward Other Races: They're usually very cautious around other races. They don't trust them, like they did under the dragon's rule. They usually shut out other races and look a little prejudicially at them. They're intolerant of dwarves and humans and will usually punish anyone who comes off their lands.
-Religion: Anul, Futh, Finar, Keyla

F. Guardians
Light- Dark - Element - Flora- Beast - Light

Talati
-Age: 298
-Stone: Light
-Eye Color: Light Brown
-Hair Color: Sandy blonde
-Race: Silvan Elf
-Background: Abandoned by his parents at a young age, he struggled to keep alive. At age twenty, he found work in a tavern, where he was feed and taken care of by Hiroshi, the tavern's owner. Hiroshi grew to be like a parent to him. When Hiroshi was taken to The Sorcerer's Council, when he was fifty-nine, he secretly followed him. When Hiroshi was convicted of trying to destroy the elements of the world, he stepped up and pleaded with the sorcerers to let Hiroshi go. The sorcerer's refused, putting Hiroshi and him in prison. At age sixty, he was locked away in the light stone.
-Personality: Friendly and good-natured, he's not afraid to stand up for something. He's good at encouraging and noticing personality conflicts in a person. He's caring and gets extremely emotional, especially if someone he cares about gets hurt.

Juhenia
-Age: 309
-Stone: Dark
-Eye Color: Neon Green
-Hair Color: Honey Brown
-Race: Light Elf
-Background: Born in the middle class of Light Elf society, she was named after the demigoddess of light. She had many friends and held a pleasant life. Upon turning sixty-five, she learned about the drows and demons that lived throughout the land, causing terror and destruction. This created anger for the races. At sixty-nine, she began to annihilate the drows, using her powers. She was captured by a sorcerer and taken to the council. At seventy-one, she was convicted and placed in the dark stone, for her crime.
-Personality: Pretty stuck up, she doesn't talk to elves "lower" than her. She prides herself on her vast knowledge of cultures and traditions. She sees herself above everyone else, and is not ashamed to point that fact out.

Hiroshi
-Age: 453
-Stone: Element
-Eye Color: Light Purple
-Hair Color: Sea Blue
-Race: Wood Elf
-Background: He grew up in a lower class neighborhood and family. He was taught to live on the street and don't take orders from anyone. At age sixty, he left the neighborhood, after a gang fight left his best friend dead. He set up a tavern in another town, doing most of the work by himself. At age one hundred, he married a young woman, who died giving birth to their daughter. His daughter, Mattai, helped him run the tavern. She died of a sickness, when he was a hundred and forty-five. Ten years later, he found Talati and took him in. He treated Talati, as he did his daughter, and a bond slowly grew between them. When he was a hundred and ninety-five, business started to slow down. To make a profit, he tried several ways to, ultimately destroying a small lake and a nearby forest. At age two hundred and fourteen, he was taken by the sorcerer's and convicted. A year later, he was put into the element stone.
-Personality: Serious and informative, he doesn't like to joke around too much. He does like a good joke, and will often give into a smile. He's not as laid back, being a hard worker and provider. He doesn't like it when things get unfinished and will go to extreme lengths to get it finished.

Yunnia
-Age: 300
-Stone: Flora
-Eye Color: Light Gray
-Hair Color: Light Green
-Race: Aquatic Elf
-Background: She was born in the middle class of aquatic elf society. She enjoyed living underwater and playing with the fishes. At age fifty, she learned about land dwellers and how awful they were. After persuasion by some of her friends, she went to the shore and began destroying flowers and trees. At age sixty, she was taken to the council and found guilty. At sixty-two, the sorcerer's locked her away in the flora stone.
-Personality: Carefree and cheerful, she's more like a child than an adult. She's usually very happy, not letting many things get her down. She's curious about things in the above water world, especially fire.

Walikasa
-Age: 562
-Stone: Beast
-Eye Color: Neon Yellow
-Hair Color: Black
-Race: Drow
-Background: Grew up in a street gang in the slums, he became the strongest in the group at age thirty-five. By then, he was a heavy drinker and smoker and was involved in several murders and thefts. At age one hundred, he fell in love with a well-to-do girl and cleaned up his act quickly. After a hundred of years chasing her, she married another drow. Angry and disgusted, he went crazy, destroying everything he came into contact with. By the time he was able to get sane, he had murdered over a quarter of his own race and over half of the animal population in his area. Distraught by this, he turned himself in to the council, at age three hundred. There, he was convicted, and sentenced to life in their jails. Twenty-four years later, he was taken and sealed within the beast stone.
-Personality: Extremely quiet, he has deep emotions that run back as far as his childhood. He prefers to be alone. Sometimes he goes insane with thinking about his past too much and becomes extremely dangerous.

G. Religion

There is one universal God, but several "demigods," who were created by God. The demigods are usually worshiped by different elven cultures and races, mainly as the one true "god." Only the Dragon, Silvan Elf, and Aquatic Elf cultures recognizes the one God as the supreme lord over all the demigods.

God
-creator
-supreme ruler
-omnipotent
-all of the demigods and demigoddess' answer to him.

Alamar
-considered a demigod by the dragons, but not to the other races. He supposedly created the dragon races.

Anul
-demigoddess of the sun
-worshiped largely by the light elves and a few wood elves
-she supposedly controls the path of the sun and is guardian of it.

Futh
-demigod of elements
-worshipped by wood elves and dwarves
-priests usually have the power of telekinesis, a sign that they are chosen by the demigod.

Finar
-demigod of the weather
-worshipped by desert, ice and wood elves.
-weather prediction is their priests power.

Juhenia
-demigoddess of light
-worshipped by the light elves
-virgin male priests are only allowed to serve, because they're considered "pure"

Logoth
-demigoddess of darkness
-worshiped by the drows as their only god.
-priestess' are given her power to exile, eliminate, and punish
-only women are allowed into priesthood.

Los
-demigod of the moon
-worshiped largely by the drows and a few of the demons
-supposedly chooses the path of the moon and gives the moon its light.

Keyla
-demigoddess of benevolence
-worshiped by the wood elves, believing that she gave them victory during the Great War.

Mono
-demigoddess of death
-worshiped by demons as their primary god
-priests are given places of honor and respect, having dominion over all others

Zarna
-demigod of war
-worshiped by demons as a lower god than Mono
-priests are advisers to the priests of Mono

Zeig
-demigod of hatred

Zelma
-demigoddess of love

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