A/N: the sentences were purposely divided... no capitalizations... no mercy... no shame... it's the only composition i have written in such a way... sometimes life makes no sense... sometimes i make no sense... look at the big picture... yup... there's the sense...

CRY SOME TIME

if i didn't
ask for this
i'd turn away
and hide my crying
if i'd believe
no final kiss
i'd walk on
and keep pretending

but you and i have a promise made
if not for that, i'd tell you to stay

if this moment
is eventual
there's no understanding
in holding on
if this is meant
still in the next lifetime
maybe the feelings
have really gone

but you and i have a promise made
if not for that, i'd tell you to stay

we said and affirmed
never to pretend
the day our feelings strayed
and have finally faltered
i just didn't imagine
you the first to end
first who'll betray
loving the thought of us together

but you and i have a promise made
if not for that, i'd tell you to stay

your candid reasons
should have left me in tremor
your honest expressions
make me forlorn

but

you and i

have a promise made

if not for that

i'd tell you to stay

you won't hear me weep in the dark
you won't see me shed a tear tonight
you won't know that i'd find time to hurt later
and you'd never learn that i'd brave to cry some time

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*scratches head* did you get what i was saying (not the 'sense' part, but the composition)? in any case, if you've read this far... i suggest to might as well submit a review...
i would! :)