OK, I wasn't going to comment on any of the reviews I get, but I felt like I should thank Ang. Your review was longer than the poem! Thanks. I can't believe you actually got the hidden meaning in the poem. I was sure that everyone would take that literally. I'm touched that you liked it enough to search for that hidden purpose in writing this. I do that with a lot of my writing, put in hidden meanings. It just seems more creative writing and less telling a story than letting everyone see exactly what you meant. Again, thanks.