I felt bad that I posted an incomplete chapter of DMS, I also felt that what I had written didn't do it much justice. I was forcing the words out and not just letting them flow out when they felt like it. so I've decided to take down the second chapter and replace it with the basic outline of what will happen in the next chapter.

DMS2 - Basic Outline

Funeral - Parker and Mran go to Jeremy's funeral where Jason openly bashes and blames Mran for his brother's death and vows to kill her the next time he sees her. Mran gets very pissed off and starts to yell at him about dishonoring his brother's memory. As she turns to leave Jason throws a knife at her and it hits her in the shoulder.

Hospital - Parker takes Mran to the hospital where they meet up with one of the nurses they had met the last time they were there, named Anne. She checks out Mran's shoulder to discover that the wound was almost completely healed. They conclude that this mysterious healing power has to do with Mran's run in with the wolf four months ago. As the leave Anne gives them her address saying that there is an opening in her building.

Finding a home - Parker and Mran go to Anne's building to speak to the landlady about an apartment. It turns out that the landlady is Mran's estranged Aunt and they get a discount.

Back at School - Back at school the silent fear that surrounds Parker and Mran turns to active hatred. They are treated and outsiders and their classmate under the instruction make it known that they are unwelcome and unwanted. This gets to Mran's head and she starts to flunk some of her classes.

Life at Home - Parker talks about life at home since the fire and expresses his worry about Mran. He tells about the downward spiral the Mran is in and about he feels about all this.

Full Moon in Spring - Parker and Mran are up all night and become very restless. They feel the need to go to Wolf Forest. When they get there they run and frolic and wrestle with each other. The atmosphere becomes very intense and in the heat of the moment they have sex* *Note: this part will be completely censored!

The first chapter of DMS was written in may 2002 where as the second chapter is written in 2003 so you may note some change in style and things like that. The second chapter is much darker and things aren't going as well for our friends. I hope to have the second chapter finished by June but I am not sure if this will happen.