|
First
Author: godawful teen-angst poetry  PM
First what? I'm sure you can guess....another tanka
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance - Words: 64 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 04-09-03 - id: 1276041
|
A+ A-
 Full 3/4 1/2  Expand Tighten 
|
-First-
heady feelings spin
through me, and I am dizzy
under your love spell
medicine won't cure me for
I like this new lovesickness.
***********************
Another tanka from me (in the haiku section, naturally!)…for those of you who asked, a tanka is another form of Japanese poetry, consisting of five lines, with 5-7-5-7-7 syllables.
~Beth
|
||||||
