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Author:
Kenishiro
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Think of what you eat, before you want to eat it.. ;P
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- English - Poetry - Words: 38 - Reviews:
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- Published: 04-10-03 - id: 1276465
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By kenishro
(10/04/03)
{I almost ate a bad apple yesterday; fortunately I was quick to find out}
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Do you smell?
Rotten and bad,
Aching my head.
Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive criticism appreciated as well.
The author would like to thank you for your continued support. Your review has been posted.
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