These are just some short poems I wrote a few years ago. They haven't been edited since then (I haven't even used a thesaurus on them), because I want to know what you think of them as a 5th grade work. Granted, they are all pretty much the same style, but I am still eager for reviews. You will probably see a lot of lyric poems from me, but there will be some other ones, too. This is mostly something I have grown out of, so these are the last pieces of poetry of this style.

Blue, sleek, jumping

Playing in the water

Yelling, shoving, diving

Long

Shimmering in the light

Like a fish

Playing

Saving

Swimming

Like a dolphin

On a boat

Fun! Fun! Fun!

Happy

No fear

No worry

Happy

Like a child

Like a dolphin