Second Opinion
By Paperclippe
~*~
She lays
Staring blankly
At the ceiling
So useless
Just there
She doesn't do
Anything
Ever
She just lies there
Doing nothing
...*...
She reclines
Eyes affixed
In the air
So peaceful
Presence
She breathes
Calmly
Ever-dreaming
Always
She remains straight-faced
Imagining
...*...
I am just here
Gazing into thought
Inside myself
So enlightened
Of nothing
I think of
Everything
In time
I am there
Thinking
~*~
A/N: The idea for this poem came from watching too much Law and Order and
learning about parallel outline structure in English. The Law and Order
bit, I don't know, but the parallel outline structure... I figure a poem
is an outline for a thought or a story or a dream, and since it's a little
vague, anyone can see it many ways. That's kind of what the poem is about,
too.
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