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Author: ClassicElfRyoko
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Reviews: 5 - Published: 04-30-03 - Updated: 04-30-03 - id:1292662
Broken

I was there...

On that long cold night.

Just standing there in the middle of the road.

The leaves where blowing and the wind picked up.

My hat suddenly glided off my head with the wind...

I was just there thinking about what just happened.

Eyes watering.

Body cold.

Just standing there.

and eyes toward the sky.

It started to rain...

I could feel its soft touch against my skin.

Wet

slippery

Suddenly a vision past me as I stood there watching the moon rise.

It was of me...and you...

You there yelling at me.

And I didn't do anything but yell back.

You finally had enough and just said we were through and you left.

I gazed deeply into the darkness of the road and breathed in the cold wet rain.

Eyes shining in the middle of the night...reflections off of puddles.

I suddenly dropped to the floor on my nees.

Still staring.

listening to the rain drops.

And still I just sat there...

Feeling as if I was broken and couldn't move...

on that cold...dark night...

A/N:

ummmm just to let you know lol, this didn't happen to me. I was listening to this song by Ayumi Hamasaki(favorite j-pop singer eeps:D:D:D!!SHE ROCKS PPL!!)...anyways lol And it was sad and slow so I thought of the words and stuff while she sang the song...oh well buh byez.

You know I luv yall.:)

so don't forget to review for me and i'll review you!!



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