
| avocado
Author: godawful teen-angst poetry A choka. If you want to look at it deeply (word), then it means something. If not-well, it's a poem about an avocado.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 134 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 05-18-03 - id: 1306224
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avocado
at first I thought your
waxy, rough exterior
meant you wouldn't yield
but in truth, as I got to
know you better, i
found your insides to be soft,
smooth; a Good Person.
Then I dug a little deeper
And got to your core
A hard, stone pit; guess I was
Right (or was it wrong?)
All along.
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A choka (well, it would be, but I cheated on the last line…it should be 5-7-5-7-5-7, as far as you want to go.) I've always wanted to write a poem about something like an avocado or a grapefruit…lucky (well, unlucky) me. I have a person to relate it to!
Speaking of which…can anyone write a haiku about a can opener?
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