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Author: Redrum
Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Reviews: 1 - Published: 06-09-03 - Updated: 06-09-03 - id:1324794
So Overpowering

The smells are overpowering.
They invade my sensitive nostrils
take residence inside my nose
won't go away
stay with me all day.

Guys cologne
so musky
so strong
so nauseating.
Do they smell so bad
that they think they need to pour it on themselves?

Girls perfume
so disgustingly sweet
so flowery
so revolting.
Do they like the smell so much
that they think they need to bathe in it?

Don't they know a little dab will do?
Don't they realize that with so many people the smells clash?
Do they want to smell like they put the whole bottle on?

Don't they know
less is more?



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