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Is there any way?
To deal with the pain?
Can you still hear me?
Is there any time?
That I cannot be?
Can anyone feel me?
I yell at the people
Who scream in my head
They're tired and hungry
They want to be fed
Please give my life meaning
'fore I go insane
These aliens here
Have invaded my brain
Blood is to bone
As life is to death
If one is to break, it will spill
I am all alone
And no one can see me
I am all alone
And I'd like to be free
From these voices in my head
I need to get out of here
I need an escape
I need a quite place
A place to deal
With my face
Crying and shouting
Just don't do no good
Banging those walls with
Your blood-covered fists
Leave me alone
I've done nothing to you
Leave me alone
You treat me like I'm two
I am all alone
And no one can see me
I am all alone
And I'd like to be free
Blood is to bone
As life is to death
If one is to break it will spill
Blood is to bone
As life is to death
They go hand in hand
Could you guys do something for me? Give me lots of constructive criticism? To me, it almost seems as if they could be several short poems or something. Just tell me what you think...I'd really like to know