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Author: aspenjerome
Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Reviews: 1 - Published: 08-12-03 - Updated: 08-12-03 - id:1378470

A/N: The style of this piece is intentional.

So we're over at Stevies getting fucked up and Denise blows me up wantin to know where I am what I doin and I say I want her to come over and get fucked up and she's there in like ten minutes wearin one of those tops where her titties are fallin out and she got one of them pussy necklaces hangin underneath her jeans and she aint down on the sofa but about a minute and I got shit off and I got my fingers and Denise is feelin it and we finish that and we about to retire to something a little more inimate and I got a little Nelly with me cause he got a little, you know, somethin for the ladies and there's a knock at the door and Denise's white boy Matt and he comes in and looks at me and Denise and he know where we goin and he's a little fucked up and he calls Denise a whore right to her face and Denise says fuck you and he says naw you're the one that's fucked after I tell your parents you're fuckin the basketball team and Denise goes after him and I aint gettin in on it and me and Stevie and Davean are fallin over the place and she's smackin him like a bitch when he pushes her off and says fine sleep with the niggers and suddenly this aint comedy hour and Stevie comes round and says the what the fuck you say and Matt's starting to cry and he's saying Denise's name over and over and he's down on his knees in the doorway cryin like bitch when I tell him he better get the fuck up and outta here and Denise starts to cry cause shit she is a ho but I tell her to go to the bedroom and she doesn't wanna listen but she goes cause I got that tone and she aint gonna say no to it and she turns to leave and Matt the bitch gets up and tries to go after her til Stevie kicks him under the chin. Davean is right behind him kickin Matt in the ribs and everybody's fucked up screaming THIS PARTY NIGGERS ONLY and we cant even hear Matt and I cant kick but Denise hears it and starts runnin and screamin and I aint gonna let her stop shit and they keep kickin til there's a crack like a egg gainst a pan or an old piece a wood and they stop and wait and bout a second later blood starts comin outta his ear and Matt aint screamin now he just gurgling and we know now yeah shit he's as good as dead. Denise is screamin again bangin against me callin me a killer and I tell her I didn't kick shit and she keeps screamin you let them you let them you let them you let them he's dead he's dead and she gets way from me gets out the door outside and she's screamin and Stevie and Devean are freaked they know they just killed this bitch in Stevie's living room and they wanna run but they dont and stead they jus trash Stevie's living room till the cops come put us all in jail til it gets sorted out and we all charged Denise too til her charges are dropped so she can testify gainst us and I turn too cause I know I didnt land me one a them kicks and Stevie and Devean get 20-40 while I wait to get tried after I cooperate and Denise was all pissed and dramatic, you know, straight up front she wouldnt even come talk to me but ventually she came round actin all innocent and all walkin soft round me like she don’t know what I'm gonna do but she keep comin cause she wants some a this and finally some a this and she says she sorry she wanna be with only me cause she aint gonna get love like she get from me so she testify at my trial get my charge knocked down to misdemeanor so I get probation so's I can still college ball so I go to JUCO for two years get picked up by USC and Denise is with me straight up we got a little man and I make her walk around our apartment naked so I can fuck her when I please. 



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