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Hele Thanks very much. And I'm sorry for not checking your poetry recently, I'll be sure to do that when I have a spare moment. And as for the spelling thing, I'm pretty sure those riveting 4-page books about Biff, Flipper and Dildo (or whatever they were called) from which I was taught to read and write had correct spelling, but to this day I'm still making mistakes!
Foxtails Yup, the story is moving forward, which is kind of a problem because this is where writing it gets reeeeaaaally tricky. (.)
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this birth was bitter agony for us, like Death, our death. We returned to our places, these Kingdoms, But no longer at ease here, in the old dispensation, With an alien people clutching their gods, I should be glad of another death.
-Eliot
Chapter 4
On and on she climbed, for what seemed like decades, up that narrow
tube. Her hands shakily grasped the bars, the rusted metal digging into her
palms, as she shook the dust and rubble from her shoulders. Finally, she
reached the end, a metal trap door, looming above her. The numerous locks
hung unsecured from their places - that wasn't like Li. Usually she was
meticulous almost to the point of obsession about keeping the annex secure.
That last emergence into their world, the super-human world, must have
affected Li deeply. . . very deeply.
Aara's stomach felt twisted inside her. Every muscle was tense and
she could feel her cheeks grow hot, her heart was beating with such force,
it felt as if her entire body was throbbing with it.
She hauled the door open and squinted upward. A grate, and above
that. . . darkness. Aara could not control the shaking throughout her body
as she used her frail arms to haul herself out of the hole and on to the
damp stone ground above.
The first thing that struck Aara was the smell, or lack thereof. Li
had used vinegar to keep their fruit and vegetables sin the annex. Coupled
with the constant heat if two bodies, with only a cup-hole vent through
which it could escape, was almost suffocating. Now she was suffocated by
the air, she had grown so used to breathing heavily to drag out any oxygen
from that tiny room, that now, as she was surrounded by it, her lungs felt
limp and disused, yet at the same time, it was relaxing and pleasant. As
she sucked in the cold, clean air, her body felt invigorated.
Aara surveyed her surroundings. She was in an underground train
station. She recognised it immediately from Li's description. Ahead of her,
the tracks disappeared into a familiar darkness, and behind, the same. To
her right was a whitewashed wall. Clean and tainted only by a towering
poster with an image of a crowd of beautiful figures holding their fists
together above their heads where the caption leapt from the wall in bold
letters 'UNITED WE STAND.' To her left was a stairway. . . to Heaven. . .
or Hell, she knew not which.
* * *
Aara was hit by a sudden nausea as skyscrapers loomed above her and
all around lights and sounds crashed and flickered in an intense ballet of
life. She had to contain her wonder and disgust. Li had told her about the
world, about the cruelty and the hatred, the lights and the buildings, the
fields and the sky, the animals and the jobs. She had learnt everything
there was to know about this place, without ever having seen it with her
own eyes. All her life, the world had been nothing but the four solid walls
that she knew by heart. Now it had been ripped open and all around her was
this vast expanse of Metropolis. Just as she had once been pushed screaming
from her mother, now she was thrown into this pit of light and sound and
life. It was the first time she had seen the sky. The stars, tiny pricks of
light scattered across the dusty black of an endless night. And above it
all, the full, round, glimmering moon, like a splash of liquid pearl in the
sky, the clock of the world.
Aara was not an idiot, she was careful to stay in the shadows. Though
the Intigres had a strict curfew (ten o'clock imperial time [the Intigres
used metric] to ensure exactly eight hours sleep, earlier for children),
there were exceptions - some jobs required workers to do night shifts.
Aara's greatest fear was to be caught by the Intigres. At night she could
hear the drilling, on and on. And she could feel their silken hands grip
her neck, and the world go dark as she awoke to find herself struggling
with the bed sheets.
Aara realised that she felt very alone. Where did she go from here?
How could she ever find her way back? She did not know. But she did know
that she must carry on. For the survivors. For Li. But most importantly,
for herself.
She took a step forward, and another, and another, until she was
walking at a regular pace, towards what? It did not matter, as long as she
was moving, at least then she had some sense of purpose.
The air, although think with pollution, to Aara, was sharp and cold;
she plunged her hands into the pockets of the jacket. Her fingers settled
on a small, irregular object. She pulled it out to scrutinise it more
closely. Aara could see what it was: a tiny golden ornament in the shape of
a swallow.