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Title: Summer Time Memory
Author: AnnaSun
Rating: G
I feel happy for the first time in ages,
My face is lit up like a thousand street lamps turned on,
The swallows swoop across the sky like an RAF display team,
It’s hot today and I’m smiling,
I sit by the water,
Letting my toes tingle as they touch the cold water,
Its Summer time,
I wish I could go back now,
But these memories are locked in my mind.
AN:/ This poem was another one of my memories from childhood. This one is set during the Summer month. What did you think? Any improvements?